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Exactly what the title says.

Faced with all options exhausted, and no other way to get rid of her writer's block, Twilight Sparkle settles in one night to do the one thing she promised herself she'd never, ever let happen.


Done as a little exercise (with some rather meagre results, mind you) to help me get through some writers block on another story. Everything here is exactly as it first came out; edits restricted to fixing typos and grammar. Any mistakes Twilight makes, however, are completely genuine and left in for ‘authenticity.’


Reading by The Mystery Fluttershy Fan

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Comments ( 16 )

this is why virgins shouldn't write erotica

While this is straightforward and slightly repetitive, it does get a chuckle from me.

7849738
Heh. I'm glad my writing got someone a giggle. :twilightblush:


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Yeah... sorry. I admit it does repeat a little.

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Well, not all of them, but Twilight definitely should't. At least not without some through research.

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I am a virgin but I can do a better job that what Twi just attempted...

Edit: In hindsight...that sounded worse than what I intended.......

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This deserves a sequel to see how much she actually caves:rainbowlaugh:

Just the thought, of a stallion purposefully misplacing his coat, and leaving it lying on the ground, of all places, where somepony might stomp on it or even trip! It struck a special type of chord for the princess.

I guess this fetish has a name...

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Heh. Already having ideas on how it'd start. Still have to work on the middle and end tho. :T


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Maybe it doesn't... yet.

what is with the strikethrough after the halfway point

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I'm not sure what happened here. I think something broke the formatting.

It's fixed now.

Wow, this has been here for quite a while and yet I had not read it yet. You somehow feel embarrassed for her and wish that she gets over the writer's block. It's funny though, I like it.

Good start, could use more story to the story. +1 Like.

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Be sure to try the sequel if you want more "story" :trollestia:

I had no high goals for this one, it really was just an exercise to get over my own writer's block.

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Preaching to the choir.
I'll give the sequel a shot! 😄

A slight bristle ran up Starlight’s back, a slight shiver at the sight of the fabric tumbling to the ground before her. Then her eyes, growing wide, followed the curves of the stallion standing beside. Her mouth hangs agape, wonder befalling her as she beheld his massive—

«What you writing?»
«Ah!» Twilight screamed, almost falling out of her seat.:facehoof:
Starlight was already standing next to her and pointed with her hoof to the beginning of the last sentence written by Twilight, where her name was written by mistake.:trollestia:

A playful smile appeared on Starlight's face.
«Do you know that I prefer beautiful fillies?» – she asked with lust in her voice and gently stroked Twilight's neck. This made Twi sigh uncontrollably with pleasure, which scared her even more.:raritywink:

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