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Papa Oats
Chronic nicotine addiction and drug use are my whole schtick.
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Cool, if unexpected.
no can do. Maybe after you finish the stories
This is nice. It's almost like the story didn't just jump off a cliff.
actually now that i remember...
WHY DID Spoiled Milk future Spoiled Rich
EVEN HAVE a Horn?
She was always an earth Pony...
I dunno, but hey this is what we are here for.
Sports, True Love Mawwiage
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She had a horn so that Clean could cut it off apparently. It does seem kind of unnecessary since it could have been done using an OC.
Okay, which story is the true sequel?
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Check the short description. This one's an alternate timeline
No
I will not read this. Explaining the end of the previous fic as "just a nightmare" is such a massive cop out that i will not read this fic at all.
I'm sorry, but i just can't bring myself to read this fic
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Oh. Well the Alternate Universe tag should have been added in to explain that because when I saw this in the Feed, it never shows the short description. If not due to lack of room or the tag no longer exist, then Guts should have put "[Alternate Timeline]" in the Long Description as well.
it would be kind of a neat mechanic to have this as an I’m between story. Nightmare Moon using Clean’s pleasant dreams as fuel to use later with her return to inflict pain. Could also act as a what happened between the original story and the other one
I think I’ll keep track of both just to see what happens.
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WHILE I like both sequels as is and will read both
I'll accept this as reality solely because of this thread THAT Spoiled IS a Earth pony in Canon
I WILL still read the other because that IS the main sequel
Kinda seems like dart was a way to jump him into the two sisters line with ease. Not that I mind. I'm enjoying both so much
seems this might be a nightmare/dream and you are just making this story to troll those who did not like your switch of themes in your last story. Earth ponies can´t float objects for they are not water benders!:P
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ffs I'm retarded. Thanks for catching that.
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The reason Spoiled Milk was a unicorn was becuase I haven't watched the show past season 2, and I asked a friend for advice and he told about a bitch unicorn called Spoiled Milk. Turns out she wasn't a unicorn. fml
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Haha well that's as good a reason as any I suppose XD.
i like this version more
i liked the other version better, but im still clueless how he forgot spoiled bitch over there.....
can someone tell me?
still both works are great cant wait to see what happens next!
NANI!?
"You are already dead"
well worth the laugh.
nice~!
Nani?
I kinda like the whole 2 stories running along side each other. Would be nifty if they both collided back into one story a few chapter down the rail and poor clean learned that discord made him actually live both realities but the ponies only remember one... eh, just my deep thoughts from a shallow pond. Keep up the good work!
NANI???!!!?!?!?!?!?!111
nope.
didn't expect this.
d'awwwwww
So this story is what Nightmare is torturing Clean with while he's imprisoned? If so, I'll guess that this is going to lead to Clean's family think he's going crazy, and Clean start to question his own sanity (Nightmare trying to make Clean go insane)
Shoot, I forgot what the box was about. @_@
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In this story it hasn't been addressed yet, in the other, it contained parts if the people he's defeated.
Damn, his hunger is making me hungry. 🤤
XDDD I love you so much Clean
The name is Leslie Nielsen. Unless you were meaning Liam neeson. Either way the name was wrong.
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I meant it as a joke that his memory was failing him, He's been in that world for ~200 years. So of course his memory would grow stagnant. I'm glad someone caught that cus I thought that joke would either go completely missed, or go over people's heads.
I just rewatched all of Naked Gun as well before writing this chapter, and kept pissing my friends off by calling him Llama Nelson.
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to me, it felt about 50/50 to whether or not it was meant to be a joke or you made a typo, so i just went the route of mind as well point it out.
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Thats completely fair, I thought that some people would think I made a typo anyway, and considered not putting it in at all, but why not throw a bit of character into it as well. I mean, I can barely remember the name of people I work with let along an actor from a movie if 200 years passed by.
Damn, I sure do like this story. Im going to reread your stuff. Its after all to good, not too.
You know after started rereading earlier stories. I honestly like Blublood more then Twilight.
Even further I think he would make a better magic then Twilight. To be honest though I doubt that will happen. I just thought it worth sharing.
Ps. It always struck even for a kids show that unicorn [One can imagine wealthy and well off? Is the one that get the immortality and power?]
Pps. [Kid show all that. And destiny blah blah. But really kind of interesting message for kids shows. Is all Im saying you know? Like what if everyone got power? Or a zebra in zebrica? You know?]
[Like even a kids show. Keeping existing power structure in place are important. More important then change or growth? And of course because destiny you can always say this is how its supposed to be? Sounds rarher insidious for me.]
Sorry the long diatride at the end. I always thought for a kids show that family watchs. It really has some odd messages. [For me...mind.] plus I think its important to be critical of media we enjoy.
Ppps. [Yes I know. I cant shut my typing. But I wanted. It just like with destiny it sort of implies that you also can work and grow? But you just will never reach the same level as say Celestia? [But my rebuttel...is like? How do you grow then if you dont suck at first? Would not make more sense everyone could grow equally?]
Like what is destiny in this world if not a chain to continue the system?
Im done. Cough Cough.