After a long lasting war which has ended by the death of many men, brought down by a deadly virus, the only remaining country of the West Continent, Equestria, has been organized into seperated cities and town, surrounded by fortifications, called Ghetto. The Ghetto of Canterlot have been destroyed almost completely and Sunset Shimmer needs the best remaining soldiers to help her preventing from another disaster from striking the land.
But in that merciless land without laws, where it's everybody for themselves, will she and her team be able to defeat the plans of the leader of the Hive, determined to gain the absolute power over Equestria's inhabitants? Will their efforts be enough? Is there any chance for this flower, this last flower, to grow and bloom again?
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Uhh... post-apocalyptic AU?
This’ll either be horrible or great. Until I get more plot, I’m not sure what this is.
This already got ALL my attention *sits in her chair with popcorn* Don't mind me, I'll be watching closely.
Ni, you did it again. Catched my attention in no time, and you can be sure I'll follow this story, like, a lot.
(Sunset... What are you doing here?)
OMG i love it 😍😍 i hope you will upload the next chapter soon because it’s so interesting
I love these kinds of stories so I'm looking forward to this!
I thought it was Dash but she has magenta eyes…I thought it was Sunset but she has turquoise eyes…but Sunset's eyes can also technically be classified as blue so…I have no idea
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Rarity or Pinkie 🤔 than I don’t know 😂
“Safe,” was all the nurse answered.
“Got to get used to untimely fingering here, dude,” hurled the man with his hoarse voice.
MY FREAKING GLOB.
OH THIS IS SO INTENSE!!!
Dun dun DUUNN
OH MY GODDDDD!!!
Oh god... Did she really... Just killed Sunset or Am I mistaken?
Sunset has arrived on the scene…we can only hope this will go well
Sunset!!
Oh, em, hmm, well... I admit that was embarrassing Poor Soarin.
Twilight and Dash are cousins!? Well, I never saw that one coming!
(I wonder why Sunset didn't mentioned Soarin in all her come-and-help-us-please-I-beg-you talk. Probably because Dash also thinks he's dead. Yeah. It must be that) (Still wondering what were Sunset's real intentions when saving Soarin)
I love long chapters! You know I love long stories. The arc thing was more like a TTAG thing in my opinion, so I think maybe you should leave them like that. If you want to, obviously.
Pff, Soarin's now forever scarred 🙈
I'd say keep them together but if it's easier to split them, then go for that :)
Sunset did it! She actually convicted Dash of going! Let's see how that ends up.
Eh... I would reconsider that right now, hehe...
Oh, Derpy/Muffin! Hi there! Now, what the freaking hell are you doing in the middle of, oh, I don't know, THE MOST DANGEROUS FOREST THERE IS?!?!
I already have a freaky theory. If it's right, well fuck, I'll cry. A lot. If not, then I don't get what happened with Dash and babies.
Sunset's managed to convince Dash…let's see how this goes on with the three of them...oh and Muffin of course!
Wow... This felt so real...
This is so contradictory yet it's true...
Something tells me this piano has a backstory...
Oh my gosh, it isn't...?
WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH I'M CRYING!!! Gosh, so beautiful! AAAAAAHHHHH!! This was even better than I imagined!
Oh, Pinkie!
Ouch...
This sounds so intimate and romantic that I blushed. I promise I blushed.
This chapter in a nutshell? Dash is a badass and she isn't afraid of showing it.
Before I read this, I must know: Why would anyone name their home "Ghetto"? Last time I checked, you don't want to be in one of those.
Oohh, fuck. Oooohhhhhh myyyyyyy fuuuuuucking gooooosh.
I'm breathless...
Oooookay. Hooooooookay.
I... My theory on why Dash wasn't able to look at Dinky was that she lost a baby... And I was right... I'm crying, because it's so sad that I'm right...
Oh, Soarin... My baby boy Soarin, dearest male character for me of the whole cartoon... Oh I'm crying She... Still-born... I... Was she Fire Swift? She can't be Fire Swift, can she? Fire Swift is a cutie, I can't
I can't even...
I hate you so much, Ni (just kidding, I love you, my friend ). This was totally unexpected yet expected and I don't know what's worst
Buckets of tears... Buckets...
Now, that aside (I will never forget this Ijust commented about). THIS was an awesome addition to the chapter:
Oh, you are good. You are very good, Ni, at giving the story great and meaningful details. Awesome.
Loved this chapter.
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Well, the thing is... These places are closed and the population is very distrustful, they don't really want any strangers to enter their "home"... At first, I wanted just to call them "Cities" but it seems a bit too welcoming to me...
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I don't know why, I was sure you would react this way (It wasn't Fire Swift )
Man, I felt that. It must be so hard to see her memories in literal ruins.
Things won't be the same between Soarin and Dash but that's to be expected 💔
I…did not see that one coming O.O That's depressing omg, I feel so sad WHYYYY (I'm kinda high on coffee and BTS videos right now so I may be a bit weirder than normal *cough*)
My world...
Um... How to describe what was beyond amazing? This was so complete! Loved it, though a bit sad in the end, but this is a dystopia.
Discord as a leader never came to mind, but to such and eccentric place as Las Pegasus it was totally expected.
Hey! Cheese! I love that guy! He's so funny
And... I can't help but pitying Soarin. He was so happy that everything was back to normal (or he thought so) and reality suddenly slapped him in the face in quite an abrupt way. But I can also understand Dash perfectly on why she couldn't, but yet... Welp, I'll have to wait to see how awkward it'll be to them the next day, and until she finally tells him (or show him or whatever), though I can picture a lot how that I'll go, knowing Soarin.
• euphoria •
a feeling or state of intense excitement and happiness.
When I was reading the last part of this, where they go out and have fun, this was the only thing I could think of. Euphoria. A rush of happiness...but it's limited, just temporary. It fits xP
Welp, and here I thought Soarin and Dash'd go all the way, dammit xD
Oh. My. Gosh.
This was.
Wow.
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
It's nice seeing moments from before the war, seeing stuff from when everything was fine. I loved seeing the development in their relationship <3
And it's alright! Take all the time you need! :)
*excited screams*
I
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GOING
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OH MY GOD,THIS IS SOOOOOOOO FRICKING A M A Z I N G!