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TheMareWhoSaysNi


When the legend becomes fact - print the legend. (Specialist in AU stories)

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Who is Sunset Shimmer? There's more to one person (or pony) that only what there is to see. After all, there's right and wrong in everything and everyone.

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Comments ( 6 )

I read it all in sunsets voice it's a lovely little insite to my lovely waifu.

She's pretty the reason why I love EQGverse in the first place.

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Thanks :heart:
You pointed out mistakes... Would it bother you to send me a PM where you explain me what the mistakes are? I'm trying to better my English and a little help is always welcomed (as well as constructive criticism) :twilightsmile:

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Yes, I'm not :twilightsmile:

Though I'm graduated in English and considered fluent, there are still mistakes that could be done. The thing when you learn a foreign language is that you should never relax in your efforts or else, you can just forget everything or even lose some of what you learned. You know what I mean?

Sweet, short, lovely and to-the-point. Beautiful work, TheMareWhoSaysNi.

Here’s one paragraph that stands out the most.

Of course, when I come back home at night, no one's welcoming me. I fall asleep alone in my bed, and I wake up still alone, forced to prepare my own coffee, with my own dishes to do and if I have nightmares, no arms are embracing me. The difference is, I'm no longer lonely. I know I can grab my phone, call one of the girls and their voices comforting me are going to be as warm and joy-bringing as an embrace.

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