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TheMareWhoSaysNi


When the legend becomes fact - print the legend. (Specialist in AU stories)

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Soarin wakes up suddenly in the middle of the night. A strange noise catches his attention from the bedroom next to his. What he will discover is going to make him realize - It is time to be true to what is inside his heart.

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Comments ( 27 )

Wonderfully done.

That was beautiful :pinkiesmile:

That was really really well writen and filled with the right amount of the right emotion:pinkiehappy:good job:pinkiesmile:

Wow, just wow! I have no words!

:fluttercry: So beautiful :heart:

Oh my ! :fluttercry:
Thanks a lot, everypony :heart:

Really well written, you describe scenes so nicely!

I love it! :rainbowkiss:

Wonderful. Though will there be a "sequel"?

7630549 I didn't plan a sequel, unfortunately... :pinkiesad2: But who knows?

To favs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart:

This touched my heart :fluttercry: How I've missed reading fanfics :heart:
Keep it up!

Amazing! I loved the way you described the scenes. It's like you made each gesture seem so special and meaningful... This was really touching and beautifully written. Congratulations! :twilightsmile:

7697354 Wow ! :fluttercry:
Thanks a lot, really :heart:

You really do have a special way with words. I don't usually ever put one shots in my best of the best category, but because of your eloquent language, and your clearly advance knowledge of the emotion the character is feeling, i must make an exception. Have a follow as well for a reward of your superiority.

7707593 Wow, thank you, really, I'm moved :fluttercry:

I'll keep on doing my best :heart:

7715707 okie dokie lokie!:pinkiehappy:
I'm sry dude, I don't usually talk like I did on my last comment. :rainbowlaugh:
Cool story bro.
Hope u don't think I'm a Neanderthal now.

:pinkiegasp: I love this!! :pinkiesmile:

7719124 No offense :twilightsmile: (also, I'm a girl :twilightsmile: )


7736922 Thank you :twilightsmile:

7765412 I call everybody dude

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Im going to fav this!!!!!!! P.S. i rly love how u write!!

Awwww:heart:
I really love your writing style! You express words so beautifully and eloquently. Instant fave:twilightsmile:

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