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Queen No More
Queen Chrysalis is defeated and her rule comes to an end. One unicorn holds her life in her hooves.
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Discord's thoughts as he returns via stone imprisonment to that horrid villain...Mr. Pedestal.
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[Genderswap] Prince Tempo and Gleaming Shield have to escape one of Queen Oscura's traps.
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Queen No More by BlackWater

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Sad Slice of Life

The royal wedding is saved but at what cost? There was more to the changeling attack than was apparent and Twilight begins to wonder if it was all as black and white as it seemed. Queen Chrysalis was defeated and her rule was taken from her. With no food and no allies, she is doomed to the dreary fate she had always feared. When faced with potential tragedy, Twilight has to make one of the scariest decisions of her life. Does she help the dying changeling or leave her to her "just" end?

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21st Jul 2012

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21st Jul 2012

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shoelovesyou

#1 · 43w, 5d ago ·

SPECTACULAR JOB!!!

MagusNeon

#2 · 43w, 5d ago ·

Hmmm. A story in which Chrysalis ISN'T truly evil. I for one say...IT'S ABOUT TIME! So many people discount the pressure she must have been under to feed her "children". :ajsleepy: ..sigh.. This looks like a story that deserves continuation.

Draco Dei

#3 · 43w, 5d ago ·

She had expelled great magic in those last moments in Canterlot and, as a result, she was now starving once again.

-In the fight with Celestia? But that wasn't the "last moments" I wouldn't say. Maybe you mean when she was hit by the blast? The magical equivalent of getting punched in the gut in the right way to cause vomiting*?

*Not sure this is actually something that happens, but it sounds plausible.

-The ending went a little too far. Just because you a friendly towards someone doesn't mean you have to (or should) trust them NECESSARILY. Twilight should have been more careful I think. And by "careful" I mean immediately notifying Celestia as soon as Chrysalis was stable. Shoot, unless the letter from Celestia included something to the contrary, Spike should have done so on his own initiative.

Perteks