A good story isn't measured by how long it is, but by how long it stays with you.
Today's the day.
It’s a wonderful day, a terrifying day. Today's the day you finally asked Sunset Shimmer out on a date!
If only you had remembered to tell her it was a date...
A light-hearted parody of 2nd-person stories via a “sort-of story” about how I use description in my actual stories and why. An extended version of this. You can direct all pitchforks and torches toward this gal.
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If people are so inclined, I can add a second, “non-integrated” version as a side-by-side comparison.
>TFW you know your waifu will never be real and you can never have moments like this.
Nice little story though.
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You will do so because people come here for c. Not a narrative lesson in how to write a proper story. Yeesh!
This was probably the most interesting narrative piece i've read in perhaps ever.
Love the way you shape words of pony into this magnificent works of literary art.
Also Sunset is freaking hot.
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Where was this picture when I was browsing for coverart? Glad you liked this.
Fascinating and insightful. And even with the annotations, the story gripped me enough for me to feel the disappointment in the climax and the triumph on the denouement. Brilliant work. Thank you for one heck of a piece of metafiction.