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Lost In A Vacuum


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The first encounter was a scouting mission for what was left of the Atlas Company, an extremely powerful super-corporation, looking for a new exploitable material to bring their company back to the top and they found exactly what they were looking for. Equestria, code named Planet E. It was rich in every kind of natural resource, Atlas knew that they had to have it. Surprisingly the occupants of E were very accepting of Atlas and allowed them to mine. Unfortunately the seemingly peaceful lands of E were tainted by the poisons of weapons, drugs and... other things that were brought in by the alien visitors. Soon the great, peaceful lands began to evolve ever so into a cruel, harsh wasteland.
As with the spirit of all humans, rumors began to pop up of great powers of the element only known as "8". Soon the land became overwhelmed with pirates, scavengers, and treasure hunters alike in search of "element 8". As time had come to have it, the great Treasure Hunters of Pandora themselves finally arrived. But they seemed special. By orders of the Princess herself, they were to be aided in the search. But, as fate might have it, the treasure hunters ship just so happened to crash by a town named Ponyville...

Slight gore here and there. But it isn't 'all in your face' guts and agony all the time, so there you go.

I do not own My Little Pony or Borderlands. Borderlands is owned by 2K games and Gearbox Software, MLP is owned by Lauren Faust and Hasbro.

Side Note: This is my second fanfic on the site (And EVER). Feel free to leave any suggestions on how to fix my writing. I'm still sort of new at this and any tips to improve my work would be very much appreciated.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 26 )

Borderlands MLP crossover?

FUCK YEAH!

FUUUCKKK YEEEESS! Borderlands-crossover! MAKE MOAR!

Wut..... *ALLOFMYINTERNETSAREBELONGTOYOU.jpg*

Trixie is Mad Moxxi... seems appropriate.

Oh my god, this is amazing. This crossover is so fantastic Idon'tevenwhatisthis

I'm gonna say this won't be good judging from the amount of spelling mistakes in the description alone.

Let me know if I'm wrong.

62686
Really? It's that bad? Sorry, spelling never was my strong suit. I guess I'll go fix it then.

so dont they have their shields or what?

73125 I thought Spike made a pretty good shield...
I was going to fit this in eventually, but I might as well give it to you now:
The reason they're even on this planet is that they ran outta cash.:fluttercry: So they were planning on going to find this element 8 and sell it to the highest bidder (Maybe Atlas). So the fact of the matter is they could only afford to buy a few good guns and a crappy ship to get to Equestria and make some more money. Cause in the end, that's what makes the world(s) go round.
Good observation though, a Moustache Spike for you!
:moustache:

I have to LOL at the first part, he heard the bullet before it blew his head off, what kind of bullet goes less than the speed of sound lol! :rainbowlaugh:

Okay, typos here and there, but the story is consistent... except for the fact that you had Equestria have the same fauna as Pandora, which I can't gulp down. I mean, skags? Seriously?

373956 Yeah, I relised that this was just a little off. After I was done with my current project I was gonna come back to this and completely redo this and make it much more: 1)Enjoyable 2)Reasonable 3)Overall Better
But anyways, thanks for the feedback.

375271 You "were"? Aren't you going to do it anymore? :fluttershysad: I was even going to offer a few pieces of advice...

375480 Oh, my bad. I meant to say when I was done with my current project I was going to come back to this. I'm still working on something else at the moment, but I will most likely come back to it once this other project is out of the way.
Also, seeing as I'm always trying to improve my writing, I'll gladly take any advice you got for my writing.
Thanks in advance. :pinkiehappy:

375569 Woo, excellent news! :raritystarry: I'll be waiting, and giving feedback as the story goes.

375621 Okay, just don't hold your breath.:twilightblush: I my current story is gonna be a long one. Just sayin'...

FIRST! haha. mordacai is always awesome.

75566 one fired from a shitty gun?

Trixies mad moxi ?

MONEY DON GROW ON TREES! I GOT BILLS TA PAY I GOT MOUTHS TA FEED THERE AINT NOTHIN IN THIS WORLD FOR FREE! NO YA CANT STAND DOWN, YA CANT HOLD BACK THOUGH YA KNOW WE WISH WE COULD! ALTHOUGH THERE AINT NO REST FOR THE WICKED, UNTIL WE CLOSE OUR EYES FOR GOOD!

I Wonder how Brick would react to seeing Rarity....:raritywink:

373956 The crazy people of Pandora must have brought them along. I bet both Atlas and Hyperion is full of those guys and the Skaggs!

375672
"Don't hold your breath"
If any of us did, those ones are definitely dead by now from lack of air.

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