Rarity refuses to love anypony not proper and perfect enough for her. After all, she only deserves the best! But, of course, it's a certain farm mare who starts showing her affections. And Rarity starts giving requirements for a proper courtship, but what'll she do when that farm mare completes all her requirements, all with that same unique charm?
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I noticed thru most of the chapter you misspelled Applejack, you called her Appledash.
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How'd I make that mistake?! I'll fix it right away, thanks!
Nice, cute story. I don't even like Rarijack but this is cute. A shame we don't get to see the follow up, but nice ^^
You could probably benefit from a spell checker, as you have a few mistakes here and there. Well instead of will or other similar words swapped, missing a letter or wrong tense etc. Small things! But removing them would make reading that much more fluid and enjoyable