Someone with a love for Kirby, Kirby, Kirby
All Kirby wanted was to save his planet from being ruined by the hands of The Haltmann Works Company. He never dreamed that battling Star Dream would end with him being in a land of colorful equine creatures. His end goal is to return home, and the ponies are determined to help the pink puff get home. The question is, are they prepared for the trials that await them and will they be able to get Kirby home in the first place?
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Great story,I like the detail put into it.
This is a very interesting start. Keep it up!
I kind of hope Kirby has matured enough to speak in more than Poyo's and Hi's. I know near the end of Anime, he was supposed to be learning how to say names...
I can only imagine how Twilight will react when see both sees Kirby, and when she sees him inhale something and possibly activate his copy ability.
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Heh! Thats usually one of the best parts of any Kirby in Equestria stories.
This is Kirby we're talking about that can punch a planet in half and nothing can kill Kirby
This is why Kirby is my favorite who's 8 inches and have a ridiculous feat in DB
Very nice so far.
By the way, as long as your incorporating things from the anime, I have an idea for a little quirk Kirby could have.
I like to read more what happen next chapter.
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Oh? Do tell!
Love it don't stop the greatness buddy
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Simple, remember that episode with the pie/stomach monster that made pies so bad that even Kirby wouldn't eat them? Well, perhaps when Kirby meets Pinkie Pie, she lays out a bunch of treats, and he inhales everything except the cream pie, because he doesn't trust them anymore.
KUUUUWWWWWIIIIIIIIII KIRBY SOOOOOO CUTIE. but they will about to ecounter Kirby villain.
Not too bad, I'm surprised he didn't take the opportunity to become Stone Kirby though.
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He can't exactly pick and choose what he uses to get an ability from if he eats a pile of assorted debris. Honestly, If that cafe you see in one episode is still up and running, he MIGHT be able to get Parasol, or MAYBE Magician if he gets lucky and Twilight fires a shot at the same time as he inhales. Maybe even WING if he manages to get one of RD's feathers...(Or an entire Bird.) So unless Rarity brought her sewing kit, WITH the needles, that's about it for his options.
Great story so far I’m kind of hoping spike somehow gains some new power and aids Kirby throughout his fights and him not being on the sidelines
IT GO TIME AND KIRBY MUCH HAVE CPOY POWER TO FIGHT THE FAKE DEDEDE!
Spike felt something spark Inside him. I hope that means what I think it does!
first, clone dedede is beat it. sec, what spike is he feeling? also who be next?
He's so adorable when he does that.
They might not get answers.
... i just got the pun in your username. clever.
Would that be considered super convenient or inconvenient timing?
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....both? maybe.
look like the guard did not know the princesses have hear Crystal Empire other thing beside gone to ponyville to se Kirby. what are the princesses gonna find out they did not go to Crystal Empire.
Something tells me, that Suzie will be making an appearance, if not her Father.
Oh boy!
SLEEP KIRBY! That most adorable yet useless copy power!
Twilight's reaction at the end was priceless
sleep Kirby!
You have no idea how long I’ve been waiting to find a proper Kirby crossover! I could kiss you right now! Lol. But in all seriousness, please don’t stop writing. I’m having so much fun with this fan fic.
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I'm glad you like the story! And don't worry. Progress may be slow, but I'm determined to see this story to the end. 😉
I love the fact that Kirby is literally is own pocket dimension. He doesn't HAVE a pocket dimension, he IS his pocket dimension.
In truth the more I read the more Twilight and Rainbow kind of piss me off. This is higher levels of just being mean for the sake of being mean.
9016127 I have to agree with you on that note. I did want Rainbow and Twilight to be less trusting to Kirby than the rest of the group but I do think I went a bit overboard. I'll see if I can find a way to redeem the two further down, but I'm kinda thinking of revising the chap a bit.
I see my piephobia idea was used, now if we can just get a copy ability soon?
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It's fine. It's more on Twilight's part since she's supposed to be learning about friendship and all that. Dash is technically on point since she was kind of a bitch in the first two seasons. I don't know when you were setting this off the top of my head though.
On a different point have you seen my most recent blog post? You might be interested in what I posted there lol
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Where is that from, anyway?
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http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/Belly_Buster
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No, I meant the idea that he's scared of pie because of that. That wasn't from the episode, was it? Because I sure as hell don't remember it.
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My idea
Oh god...Star Dream followed him. This does not bode well.
This is gonna be spooky!
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Um... that was made blatantly obvious from chapter 1
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No, as far as I can tell, it was just strongly hinted at. The only thing made blatantly obvious, was that it was sending enemies after kirby. We didn't know if it actually followed him itself.
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Pulled right from the end of chapter 1
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OK, OK goddamn... It's been a year since then, do you really think I re-read the entire story after every update?
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Not really, I'm just a bit picky when it comes to details
Can’t wait to see what happens
This dead?
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What does it mean?
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Hopefully not! Sorry, I've been busy. Life cares for no one unfortunately... But I do know what it feels like to watch a story grow, only for it to fall in the "forever incomplete" zone. Even though progress may be slow, I do intend to see this to the end, if only to make sure you all don't have to suffer the feeling of watching a story die.