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Someone with a love for Kirby, Kirby, Kirby

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Adeleine and Ribbon were just enjoying their day, not hurting anyone, minding their own business.

Then they fell into a hole.

Next thing they know they're in a world of colorful talking ponies that fear and despise them!

Something about being the worst creature in the history of ever? Or was it bringing endless fortune to those who captured them?

Anyways the two are forced to find a way home, all while being hunted for the crime of simply existing, and while they have their equipment to make things easier, having to rely on their belongings can't be good in the long run. . .

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Comments ( 10 )

Ooh... A Kirby crossover... You have my interest.

I think Equestria was being biased.

Oof. This ain't gonna end well. I suppose that Ribbon will be hunted based on association as well... PONIES may be cute, but remember that Earth Ponies can shatter rock and shake trees, Pegasi can outfly any escape attempt as well as manipulate LIGHTNING clouds, and Unicorns... Have magic.

Welp. They screwed without Kirby.

Poor Adeliene and Ribbon

With the summary, Pic and tags I'm expecting some sort of constant runaway situation with only those three filled for help, but not because they want to HELP, but because of their cutie marks. Later on, (insert random scenario here) happens and the three realize that humans aren't that bad, but have to prove it to everypony else.

Am I even close?

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Constant Runaway? Yes.

CMC helping? Well yes, but actually no. Definitely in the name of their Cutie Marks though.

*Insert pony finds out humans aren't all bad* hmmm maybe. I'll never give a true definitive answer til the chapter is upon you.

In summary, not too bad a guess for the plot. but it should have a few twists to keep you on your toes.

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Don't forget that Ribbon is a fairy, which is basically a tiny human!

Yep. Sorry for those who wanted Zecora to speak, but I'm fairly certain I'm not good enough with rhymes in order to pull off her character properly.

I recommend RhymeZone. That's a website where you can just type in a word and it'll give you several words that rhyme with it. It's also good for synonyms, definitions, and similar words.

Adeliene and Ribbon don't give up!😐

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