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emeraldhuskydragon0


i’m so sorry for everything i’ve done.

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After Trixie breaks a teleportation spell, Scootaloo the not chicken becomes flat and is sent on an adventure to collect the Pure Hearts with a dude named Mario and a butterf- Pixl named Tippi.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

Pretty good so far...

Keep writing! :derpytongue2:

This story’s writing is some unholy mix of amateurity and professionalism, and I’m really liking it for the most part.

Gosh, I haven't played Super Paper Mario in years. I may need to see a playthrough to better visualise the story.

It is good, by the way, and fun. I can't wait to see Mimi. and the Underwhere, and above all... The Green Thunder... Mr L!

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Find it on your own, or name drop?

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I found it on my own.

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Apologies for the words that may seem insensitive, I generally enjoy the story.

*remembers that place and the Mimi fight*

This might end up needing a teen rating...

I can still hear "Mimimimimi..." echoing in my head...😱

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*neck snap intensifies*

Yeah...

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At least that cross between Chrysalis (because of her transforming powers) and Mariel (a Kirby enemy that sprouts long skinny spider legs) doesn't make an incredibly horrifying face upon her defeat like a certain bloom from Undertale does. Now that, my friend, is true nightmare fuel...:fluttershbad:

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