The Star allies have been caught off guard by a mysterious portal while on their way home from their latest adventure and split apart across a world filled with the same force that brought them together in the first place, Friendship.
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I hope you all enjoy my story I have some big plans for the Star allies it also gives me a nice opourtunity to delight Kirby and MLP fans I hope to see this maybe rise up to the level of popularity as many of the greatest stories in the entire website! Ambitious can't even begin to describe that......
also*clear through* Marx fans..... RISE UP!
lor starcutter's name should not be connected
the beeing is spelled being, and it doesnt need to be in the sentence
miracle not miricle
i believe its driblee not dirblee
Taranza, you forgot the 'a', same with daroach, you spelled it daroch lol
since im on mobile i probably missed some xD, gonna see where this story goes.
Mistakes fixed
Merry xmas/ hearts warming everyone
Hey I thank you for making this story Ive been looking for a good kirby story on here.
When is the next update
Thx
the net update is coming around next week im coming in with two chapters next time so we've got... lets see a city of the sun and moon..... and then a tundera crystals
you know what I mean
Hey look everyone I did the overused Undertale reference!
Also I pre write alot of chapters and it takes a me awhile to edit them for fim fiction's standereds
cant wait for more!
you forgot the r in Equestra
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same with last one.
i think you meant pegasi
If the Kirby characters in this story had voice actors, what would they sound like?
Neat
oh btw I used lavender town there to really just set the mood of how much of a dilapidated state the hive is in right now and also this is during the time in between the 13th and 14 episode of season 7 how did chrissi get a new hive? well...... its best not to mention it..........
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Meta Knight would sound similar but far less Spanish than his anime counterpart, Suise would sound like a much more serious resptionest, Marx... hmmmm I don't know, and I think we all know what what Dedede's would be (DEDEDE THATS THE NAME YOU SHOULD KNOW)
Daroach you slick bastard
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Daroach: sorry but its to shinny! Lets me have this!
Next time i'm gonna put out one of the shortest chapters in the whole book after that then we've only got 10 more chapters to go before the half way mark
To the author - *sighs heavily* Now i can finally give my thoughts... oh my god this is adorable (especially in chapter 4 when Kirby ate twilight sparkle...i'm not into vore! just thought that scene was funny as hell) cause i was thinking '' when Kirby gonna do what he's known for" can't wait to see the reactions of other mane six.
p.s: the writing is very good, so no issues with that.
title chapters (of chapters 4 and 5) in the index should be spaced once & in your profile description there's no 'e' in BRONY!
poor knocked out Kirby!
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oh also i didn't intentionally make the Daroach mistake but i'm glad i did because.... it makes his name sound more like what its based on a cockroach
Please put your chapters through Grammarly or a similar program that checks grammar because the mistakes in each chapter are killing me :(
I'm so sorry to anyone who read this before now.....
I forgot to add the link and then i had to go to my classes so I didn't get to add it until now
Again, so sorry!
I only realized I forgot is when I rembered that I didn't do it
and thats when I said "i've made a huge mistake" in my head and my brain said "now you screwed up!"
Ok how to make it up to them.....
You know what... screw everything! Next time were gonna have a Q and A session! put your questions down in the comments section of this chapter and i'll most likely add them to the session
Yeah, Gooey is the black sheep of his 'blood family'.
Nice prologue! You know, the prologue is actually quite similar to the prologue of my story Guest Star Kelduo: Justice From Afar. If you happen to read it, I suggest you read the prequel to the story first. The prequel, Kirby Star Allies: Friend Hearts are Magic, is all about Kirby Kirby Kirby! That's the name you should know!
You'll also meet an OC of mine: a friendly robot based off of the Pokemon known as Porygon-Z. If you're into Pokemon, there's a few of them in the story as well, because this story is based on a Nintendo crossover fanfiction of mine.
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Your Undertale reference fills me with DETERMINATION.
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You'll holler and hoot, he'll give Kirby the boot! Dedede is the one! ...Sorry, I couldn't help it.
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In the end yes......
in my version of the Kirby story when Kirby and the gang got to donut dome cave (the place where Driblee set up her kingdom) she offered to help expel the jammba heart fragments with her purification powers, over the course of their more than a week-long adventure to jambandra base Marx and Driblee eventually fell in love and nowhere in equestia they really care about one another and love each other and don't worry it isn't "that" type of love.....
also because of that love that's really gonna make the changelings a bit envious towards them and eventually Marx and Driblee will betray them to defend their friends and their two new friends Now their really close, and throughout the adventure their gonna have to put their powers and skill to the test, also I'll explain this now, Marx and Magolor are not evil the dark mater residing n the master crown corrupted Magolor, and Nova's darkness infused wish corrupted Marx's very soul, and now Marx has recently been taking meditation lessons from Driblee and Meta Knight to keep the corruption at bay
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Hmmm interesting....
oh btw this Kirby is regular Kirby not anime Kirby, yup this has no ties to the anime, although in future Dedede will.... "pop off" as competitive smash bros player call it, so when the chapter rolls along.....
DEDEDE THAT'S THE NAME YOU SHOULD KNOW! DEDEDE HE'S THE KING OF THE SHOW!
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LOL!!!!
I like you! your one of my more chatty readers and I love it! Especially because this is my first fic ever......
I guess you can say I'm DETERMINED to finish this fic!
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Don't worry, the time of the great Tripple D will come
AND ITS GONNA BE AWSOME!!!
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You should expect at least one comment from me on each chapter of this story. And by the way, I just stumbled upon this fanfic and immediately clicked on it. I'm a big Kirby fan, and I even main King Dedede in Smash Bros.
I'm glad you like how I'm a chatty reader. When I see something in a fanfic that interests me, I can't help but to comment on it. In fact, the majority of A Sweetie Dreamland's comment section is dominated with conversations between me and the author.
I already knew that Magolor wasn't actually evil; in Kirby's Dream Collection, he was shown to feel truly remorseful for his actions and built an amusement park to make up for it. And my headcanon for Marx is that after being defeated by Kirby the first time, he's been hiding in the shadows, training and waiting for a chance to strike back. Years later, a certain human OC of mine would gather the remnants of Star Dream and take them to Marx, offering him a chance to "get revenge" on Kirby (by which he actually meant to assist in an epic battle against me and my friends; the human meant no harm to me, simply wanting to vent his anger over his past by battling me). Cue an awesome team-up between Marx Soul, Soul of Sectonia, and Helix (the aforementioned human OC who serves as my rival).
Also, I love your avatar picture. Mirror and Yo-Yo are my favorite abilities!
You forgot the first 'a' in Taranza.
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................. oh, that's a thing
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Same I LOVE MIRROR!!! Sadly it didn't return in star allies
and no Mr. "CRAWLING IN MY SKIN!!!!"(Dark Meta Knight) over there doesn't count
Dedede main ehhh, may the shining light of popstar help you clobahh elite smash
Also if it makes you feel any better this will include pokemon like your story, mainly the two that helped me become a pokemon fan, Pickachu and Eevee
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I'm also practicing with Corrin because I want to recreate the Kirby anime opening except with female Corrin (starring as Sweetie Belle) in Smash. I've got some other recreations in mind too, such as Kirby versus Dark Samus (as the Nightmare Wizard) or Kirby versus Ivysaur and Bayonetta (as Flowered Queen Sectonia). And I really hope to recreate Dedede's cartoon from Cartoon Buffoon, with Isabelle as Tiff, Villager as Tuff, and Greninja as Escargoon.
Actually, I'm unable to fight others online in Smash, because of my "weak" internet. The stupid game is afraid of disconnecting mid-battle, which could disqualify me. Not that it matters, because I don't think I'd be able to take on fellow players around the world.
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Don't worry I think we all know the internet can be a bit of an As* some times, I remember when joker came out and everyone (including myself) wanted to play online but the connection went down and no one could play
Recreating the glorious anime opening..... you sir.... are a GENIUS!! Although the video recorder for smash is a little finicky(don't even remind me of what shared content once was
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Really? I thought that was Galaxia Darkness from Kirby: Planet Robobot. Smash 4 has the lightning bolt strike diagonally, not horizontally.
You mean Tour of Harmony and Sweets?
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looks like I made more mistakes than I thought
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It didn't go diagonally It went horizontally across just like in the games, although the lighting bolt's size quite more formidable than it is in the games
Hey. I'm a Kirby main too. I reached VIP with him.
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You reached elite smash!
My god, I don't have even a single character in elite smash yet!
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Kirby main since I'm five years old, since the first Smash Bros, and proud to be.
And I reached it the first day when I used the free internet offered with the Switch.
Notice how I underlined Marx's soul saying "I CAN DO ANYTHING!"
Keep that in mind for later....
That is if you don't already get the pretty obvious reference, but still, in my belief, himself and the alluded character are almost equal in power.
Actually, it's spelled canon.
Which medley, the one by Juno Songs?
If I had to guess, he'd probably listen to the song Batman plays in The Lego Movie.
Do you plan on getting Pokemon Sword or Shield? My favorite Pokemon in that game is Sandaconda, and my overall favorite is Keldeo. Also, I've beaten both Squeak Squad and Kirby Super Star Ultra to 100% (including beating Helper to Hero with all helpers). I still can't stand Marx Soul's death scream, though, so I kept the volume at 0 when I fought him.
I've told you this before, but I'm a Dedede main, and I prefer Smash mode. I can't do online Smash because of my weak internet, but I'm still able to clobber CPU opponents. You should have seen me make a level 5 Palutena go from full health to 80% damage in under 10 seconds on Dedede's home turf, Green Greens!
I also main Roy from Fire Emblem, in hopes that I can get a shot of him with Keldeo.
You mean "does."