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Given Chance


I am here to post my ideas and I believe everyone should be able to express their ideas.

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This story is about a human during Fallout in the pony lands as you know as Equestria. During as we know the Fallout or if you want to joke about wanting a Nuclear Winter.

Um... Are you talking about the world of Fallout: Equestria?

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No going to make something new for myself and my friend... even though he ruined my last one... but this one is different.

interesting story friend goes on like this
:raritystarry:

Comment posted by Given Chance deleted Nov 12th, 2017

3 Find out where this base 2 tries to talk to them, where you are and what happened to their world and if the rest fails at least you have meat for several days:pinkiecrazy:

Resist temper 1/3 a true survivor will always keep their emotions in check when encountering the unknown and great story so far

Resist temper but keep the toothpick ready if they attack again.

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KingPotatoe lol! Damn toothpick might come in handy!

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true but scold those who almost opened a second nostril.:ajbemused:

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Hey buddy good to see a familiar face-ish

Anyway I'll be right on it if I don't forget

"hey Ranger! Meet Ranger named him after you after I saved his life, wait? *mumbles* your ranger but he's also ranger? So two rangers that's funny ain't it? Well you can have my fort never even liked it anyways too much work."

-Ratbag 2017

Left the road is not well lit but at least they may know that there in front, who knows maybe they will meet "hunter" through the tunnels.
:trixieshiftright:

1. it would be interesting if he can pull it off

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[Challenge Accepted]

(I doubt I can make it good... but let's see how shit I do.)

1. Sounds like fun

4 a gotta have those bullets

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How'd he ruin it? If you don't want to talk about it, then just say so.

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You're random comment gave me blind hope. Thank you.

Im not being sarcastic... but it sort of sounds that way.

"Alright I'm just glad I saw this message today."

I LOVE IT! NEVER SAY YOUR WRITING IS BAD! IT IS AMAZING!

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But I got lazy... so... kinda my fault. But when I get comments. "They show meh theh weh.' [Meme]

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It doesn't matter. it is a great story. people will love it some day

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Thanks Twilight... I mean Glimmerglammer... anyway thanks... (continue your story and if you need me... summon me with a comment like in Dark souls)

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"Zat is an excellent choice. It shall be done my lort."

XD! Fuhrer Space Star! You just made my day!

Jesus these views make me feel bad... I know should feel worse... I can't believe people even read it...

4. I thought I could choose a shoot them up option but you kind of bucked both ways, this way you will not waste ammo unnecessary.

HEY Xbox is good not bad why is everyone disliking each other?
A fucking war ps4 against Xbox one for ducks sake

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I have the Xbox one. You know when the "next gen" console came out. Its not as good as the newer models and the S and X.

1, 2 or 3. but leaning 3 here. but not 4, A I'm pretty sure were past this point B that would be and incredibly dickish thing to do (the red line scouts where the Russian ponies right?)

Well I can confidently say... That this is a well thought out and executed story. The pacing is, maybe, a little fast but I haven't really noticed since it does flow smoothly and gives a few different, and interesting, perspectives. It works.

oh it updated cool

hmmm intresting so far and you mix up bombshell and bonesaw some times in the other chapters and minor tipos here and there but other wise fine.

might want to look over the chapters twice after you finish them to corekt out small misstakes

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Roger that, looking into the anomaly now

intresting development now to the boss battle!

I thought about it for quite some time and started to think that people at metro have a death wish or something. Dirty rounds are of lower quality than the machine-produced bullet and that means if they cause the gun chamber to blow up, then the entire thing is going to explode right into their faces.

It has been a long time since I started reading this story, i don't know if it was rebooted but it certainly feels like a new start.
To be honest, this story made me Play the metro series again. I enjoyed the Exodus because of the feeling of freedom. I enjoyed making the tools, find them or playing different paths.

Thank you for making the story.

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Nice, very cool. Glad to have made a positive impact... No matter how small.

Anyways... It's going to be awhile before I can continue this story again. Going to training tomorrow.

Who knows, maybe you should write your own story if you haven't already.

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Not a writer. My main language is Spanish and my mind twist things between concepts and knowledge I understood before.

Nazi ponies….never thought you’d see something like that.

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Aryanne Hoofler, at your service :)

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