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Please tell me that Annabelle isn't gonna turn...
Sure, I'll tell you. Annabelle isn't going to turn anytime soon, but I don't know about later in the story. We'll just have to wait and see.
My sister's name is Annabelle! This hits home a lil too much for me cuz she has an mlp dress too. Scary how coincidence happens eh? Anyways as for feedback, your grammar is good(assuming your proof readers didn't have to fix THE ENTIRE CHAPTER(if you two did then kudos to you two, proof readers don't get enough credit/thanks from readers), your not stumbling around, nothing is awkward to read or say, and Generally the dialogue is lil bit lacking but that's to be expected In a first chapter amirite? As for content, very interesting and you have my attention, looking forward to more.
GODSPEED YOU MAGNIFICENT BASTARD
In other words, this fic is best enjoyed by those who enjoy reading for fun.
The journal entry format gives a bit of a World War Z vibe (the book, not the movie). I like it so far, and will be tracking it.
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I'm glad you like it! I'm pretty much used to writing journal entries at home, so I thought, "Why not just use that in the story instead of trying to figure it out later?" I know that probably doesn't make sense, but I'm a weird person and I pretty much never make sense to anyone.
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Lol. Thanks for the feedback! People don't get how much this stuff helps us writers, even a little can go a long way in helping a story. Anyway, I'll be adding more dialogue into it when I get to working on the next chapter. I still haven't figured out exactly how I'm going to do it yet. (I have but I dun like spoilers...)
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No, it makes sense. I myself tend to have trouble starting fics, but have so many ideas for between the covers, and have started writing from the middle. I've found that sometimes helps me figure out how the story got to where the good idea was. The journal style isn't a very common style that's used, but can definitely be interesting to both read and to figure out the writer's inferences.
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Well, why else would anyone read fanfiction? Or read any piece of fiction that isn't slapped down in front of us by school?
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To crap all over it because they can't stand people liking things they don't understand?
I've started writing chapter two and if my editors help me with it, I might have it out by... Sunday? Yeah. If they aren't available, I'll probably have it up by next Thursday. The max deadline will be next Saturday though.
Wow. Not even chapter 1 yet and this story is already getting more positive feedback than my other one. You guys actually like this?
I added two new tags because I realized that Alpha and his crew will likely have to meet the Princesses at some point in the story.
This is cool, can't wait until more
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Anyways, I'm glad you like it!
I'm working on the second chapter as we speak, it'll be out soon. Although, it'll be named Chapter 1 because, you know, I already put up the prologue.
If you spot any errors, please let me know. I'm always looking to improve!
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Dude, can I help. I got some ideas
When will we get to Equestria?....
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Soon, very soon. Possibly in the next chapter.
Trust me, alot of people do
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Lol. Yah. That's why I put it there, also for a little bit of humor, but I don't think it was that funny honestly.
Hey you guys, I already have the plan set on what Ch. 3 will have, so it should be out quickly. All I gotta do is get started.
I really like working on this, so I'll try to find time to get it up faster. No promises though, school and my life are coming first in order to even work on it.
I might be interested in reading this, but why is it already on hiatus?
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I don't have the 'supplies' to work on it as much as I can and I've got writers' block. Stuck on the second paragraph of chapter three. SPOILER: Part of chapter three is a flashback of a war scene, which is why I'm having so much trouble.
8732543 Not to sound self-inflated, but I have a story here on FiMfiction which is more than 700,000 words. Give me a few to catch up on the chapters and I might be able to help you, if you are interested in receiving help (I do not wish to impose if you do not want help).
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Its not about the amount of words for me, its the quality. I need to work a bit harder to have an epic, gruesome, and tragic scene for this. I'd love the help, but I'm not online enough to stay coordinated with whoever I'm working with. :/
8732551 I'll ignore the jab about the quality of my writing and let you read it for yourself, if you're interested. Do you want tips and such, or not? You were not very clear on that point.
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Oh! I'm sorry.. I really didn't mean to insult you. I was only trying to say that I don't mind much about the length.. I'm sorry it seemed like an insult. And yes, I would like to read it sometime. As for whether I WANT the tips and stuff, yes. I'm just not able to work with anyone on my story due to not being online often.
8788244 No problem. Let me know when you have the time and I'll get with you.
Oh please more if you cancel ill be mad its to good so thumbs up!!