Leave it to Pinkie Pie to find a velociraptor in the Everfree Forest and somehow tame it. When the frizzy-haired pony tries to show off her new reptilian friend, though, things don't go quite as planned. For some strange reason, none of her friends seem too happy to meet Utah, despite Pinkie's assurances that he's totally harmless.
Hilarity, chaos, and several Jurassic Park references ensue.
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Are you referencing the "Utah raptor"? Because when I looked at the summary, I was honestly excepting negative LDS (Mormon) jokes. This is interesting.
So Pinkie's cupcakes can gift creatures with sapience? Brilliant. Also I noticed you enjoy using the original thoughts of what a velociraptor looked like. Instead of the feathered form of our dinosaur buddy. Not that I am criticizing, just pointing it out. A dinosaur is a dinosaur to me, and I love em to death almost as much as I love dragons. I am very interested in how this will go. Sorry if I came off as a know it all, I meant no offense.
Best wishes!
Interesting. Will follow to see how it goes.
Ronald Reagon holding a MP7 with a RPG on his back while riding a raptor that is holding the American flag. Any further comments are now invalid.
lol duuuuuuuuuuuuuude why not a t rex?
Haven't read it yet, but that picture for the title is epic.
Will I be tracking the shit out of this story?
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And Gorbachev is fear-pooping himself
Music? Phhsh, nothing can tame the heart of a wild beast better than a Pinkie Pie Cupcake!
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And Gorbachev is fear-pooping himself
931466 Yes, Utah was meant to be a pun on Utahraptor, not a discriminatory remark. I was just trying to be witty and make a dinosaur joke, not offend anybody.
931482 Yeah, but after growing up with Jurassic Park and other dinosaur media, velociraptors just look weird with feathers. I know it's not scientifically accurate... but neither are talking ponies, so nya!
931531 Aw, but further comments are kinda... nice. Since I'd like to know whether you like the story or not, rather than your thoughts on the picture. "Don't judge a book by its cover" and all that.
931556 Because then half the story and jokes I have planned wouldn't work.
Something unintentionally hilarious:
In the description, it gets cut off at the end.
So, instead of saying, "Hilarity, chaos, and several Jurassic Park references ensue," it says, "Hilarity, chaos, and..." followed by the word to expand the description.
It says 'Hilarity, chaos, and... more."
931986 Normally when Utah is mentioned, the first thing that comes to mind is "Mormons" and I've heard a lot of stupid things that people think that Mormons are, and the majority of the time it's something negative. I am a member of the Church, and I like to think I've heard it all. Also I'm glad you didn't mean offense. When I saw Jurassic Park back in the day, I've became fascinated with the word "raptor".
931988 Wait, really?
..... Huh. Totally not my intention. Still... Magnificent! 
932530 Nope, no offense. Just paleontological humor.
Oh my deity, Pinkie with a raptor. This is going to end in explosions and horror.
932609 Noted.
Ha, that feather statement, reminds me of a the conversation that we had in chapter 1. Haha, anyway this is so sweet I hope to see more soon. Also I love how even Utah is confused why he gained sapience and understanding. THOSE CUPCAKES, THE HELL THEY MADE OFF?
The cupcakes, I don't want to know what the hell was in them.
How could her friends be so distrusting of that poor velociraptor? Look, he wouldn't hurt a fly!
*The raptor bites IncredibleMeh's arm off.*
...
Ow.
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE WITH THE T-REX PART
IN pewdiepies almighty words i say!!!!!!!1
BARRELS I FUCKING NEW IT!
I love how the author is sorta talking to the readers with all the references to the discussion about chapter one
I think this story has a lot of potential, considering that raptors were already pretty smart I wonder how much smarter he will get thanks to Pinkie? Will the ponies accept him? And will Rainbow call him a Spy?! Can't wait to read more.
933122 Yes-sirree.
933171 Yeah, the feathers comment was partially inspired by our banter in the comment section.
933359 I have no idea what you're talking about.
934049 Gee thanks!
I'm glad to see readers enjoying that little touch I decided to add. And yes, I have plans for this story. But... I have to ask, since apparently I missed a reference... Why would Rainbow call him a Spy? 
934151 In a lot of the fics I've read, Rainbow always seems a little distrusting of new creatures she meets and usually calls them a spy. I thought it was just some meme that was going around?
934185 Probably a Team Fortress 2 reference. Which I really need to download and play, sooner or later...
okey doki lokieeeeeeeeeeeeeee............
I think Twilight's broken
Whoops!
Accidentally hit the "publish" button instead of the "edit" button on the new chapter I'm working on! I managed to unpublish it, but it seems the story counted as being "updated." Sorry for any confusion caused. 
Also, hope I don't get reported or something. Is there are a rule against false updates? I was an accident, I swear.
Anyhoo, new chapter should be up either later tonight or tomorrow.
I'd hug that raptor, even if it DID have the intention of eating me cause seriously, death by raptor hugs sounds awesome.
CookieMonstar i totally agree with youuuuuuu
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Ditto
Very good, and I saw the refernce made by applejack
944872>>945221>>945700 I guess I should probably be proud of myself when I can make people want to hug a velociraptor, regardless of the consequences.
945700 Ah... but the question is... which reference? There were two!
Smart girl... Also the they can't open doors.
That was HILARIOUS!!!
Applejack:
Apple Bloom:
Big Mac:
Er...nah, it was still hilarious!
HAHAHAHA!
This is hilarious!
Twilight is having issues.
Keep up the good work. 
I can see the chase scene in a Jussiac Park movie. Keep up the good work.
Let us pray for Rarity. 
This is the most random thing I've ever seen! So why is it so funny? I especially lol'ed at Twilight. "My Little Raptor, My Little Raptor, Ah-ah-ah-ah-ah! I used to wonder what friendship could be! Until Pinkie shared some cucakes with me!"
Ow, now my jaw hurts from all that laughing!
Gummy is going to be so jealous.
Oh my God-damned Mother ****ing Theresa, the mental image of the end of this chapter is the best thing I have probably ever experienced. Ever.
Well, that's it. This story can't get any more awesome.
Ok now this is one funny story. But i still wonder how he came to be in the forest in the first place since he's species is extinct. Are there more raptors out there? If so Equestria may have a big problem.
Ending Song
Great chapter!
I want more please! 
Yay!
Pure Ponified Awesomeness Incarnate!
Oh, dear. I have bad feeling about Fluttershy's interaction with our raptor friend, it involves a shovel and a coffin. Keep up the good work.
like every one else this chapter is hilarious especially when pinkie played the music
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Apparently you guys both missed a reference. Rainbow Dash called Twilight a spy in the pilot episode. Yer both silly.