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IgnitingCorneas


We didn't start the fire.

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Hey now.

8580178
Get your game on.

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All that glitters is gold

Also, fic is good. My corneas were ignited, among other places.

not gay enough imo

5/7 Needs more crotch daggers.

Wait, I've been rused, where's the babymaking at?!
Wow, you're like, literally worse than Hitler right now dude
That'll teach me not to stop reading the tags at impregnation
But I'll let it slip because of this ending
But good stuff

Rarara a shit though :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

Sex is gross. And wet.

Favorited.

The contents of that potion are screaming for a sequel

Pretty good

D'aawww

Rarity smiled. "Too hot for you, darling?"

So this is how I learn I'm no longer capable of reading that phrase in any voice other than Torbjorn's. :ajbemused: Damn you, Overwatch...

Now this was a fun story but I was not expecting a few things, so spoilers.

At first when he did the little thing I thought he was going to be a bit of a douche. Then it turned out it was just a ruse for some roleplay. Then you tricked me again when they thought there was a potion then isn't a potion, and in the end both end up having a real potion.

Overall this was a fun story and you should be proud for it. You deservingly earned a thumb up and follow for that.

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RIP, Dwarf Voice Too Sexy.

Now that was a fun roleplay.
How fun that neither knew the other actually wanted something like that to happen. They're both in for a surprise when the other finally asks :rainbowlaugh:

I like the start, for some reason I thought it would be all "oh my god take me, because I'm in heat and nothing like an animal blargh"::derpytongue2: kind of thing.

"I'm feeling desperately needy! But, we can't afford to make a mistake."

I like to notice her ability to think even when being in heat, most stories don't really make that clear and only demand that they would have done that.

"God, you feel good," I said, grunting as I thrust in deep, feeling her clit wink against my shaft as I pressed my tip against her deepest barrier.

I'm stopping here because I get tired again, couldn'T sleep much, but so far it is really good and it nearly makes me want a prequel, a sequel or a story that is crossing with the events in this story. Slice of life would be enough for me I guess and I'm always into adoption to. I know they would probably get a child, but I'm not to much of a fan with them being itelligent babys and still not being able to do much.

This needs a sequel. I'm a fan of hopeless romantic stuff and think that it would be a nice idea that Rarity talks to him about it and around the time of her real estrus takes the potion without telling him before they have sex. The next morning she slips off to the bathroom to see if it worked and before the pregnancy test reveals if it did he walks in and the story ends with them getting into the shower and shows the test turning positive afterwards letting the audience know before they do.

P.S. I have ideas crop up all the time after reading stories if anyone is interested in using some. I just can't write the more intricate details of them, this is my normal setup.

I keep trying to add the story to my favorites, but it won’t work. I’ll click the ‘favorite’ icon and it’ll light up, but when I go to my favorites page I won’t be able to find this fic anywhere. I’ll put in the name, name of the author, appropriate tags/words, but nothing works. I can add it to my ‘read it later’ and ‘tracking’ just fine, though.

This is incredibly frustrating and confusing. Does anyone else experience this?

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