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Hand-Made
Dedicated to hand-made quality reminiscent of old-world charm. Specialization in anatomically correct fillies/mares having fun with human males. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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This should be a good read
Diction of the characters is not 100% accurate, but that's just your style. I'd be a hypocrite if I said there was anything wrong with it.
Other than that, the progression of the plot (tee hee) was really good. I enjoyed reading the duality between the contradictory positions. This story needs more likes and less close-minded, ignorant, hate.
--TheRussianBrony
Aw yeah, that was nice and super hot. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this, mebbe some resolution on some things, or even Twilight joining, considering the implication :3 Have an upvote!
This is good. She want a kiss kiss. But anyways, wouldn't mind seeing more of this, like explicit Twi or RD, maybe even Lyra or Roseluck or something along those lines.
DOMINATARIX RARITY HAS BEEN
DENIEDED
You know, I almost passed that particular thread by until I saw this story, and it was obvious it was you posting from the very first post, trip or no. Once again, excellent work.
More? Please?
6669...truth is stranger than fiction.
Anywhoozles, an amazing work as always.
*hat tip*
Go die in a carfire.
I likey
H'excellent, something new and really, just premise wise I was quite looking forward to it. Needless to say, I wasn't the least bit disappointed!
I didn't notice too many overarching thematic points, but I do like how Rarity was portrayed in this whole episode. It's fun, Rarity being as Rarity is, confronting her own issues and ideas in a fashion that seems quite generous and noble of her. Well, as noble as it can get for her
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Rarity just feels fun in this one, it's hard whether to tell if she's entirely served by her previous experiences (they play a significant part in the betrayals of the past, to be sure as it was hinted at almost from the get go) or if they're merely the repressed fabric of her own kinks (as she briefly said near the end). It's fun to try and work out figuring out her psyche but it feels legitimate too. In particular the notion of her being some sort of elegant protector of all the fillies and mares just feels right too given her experience. “I have a business, a career, wealth, status...I am d-dominant..” it lends itself really nicely to her bass reluctance at something far deeper than simply being uncouth.
What can I say, I like the reversal. The whole usurping of the expected and turning it to be less about 'Equestria' and more about some of the more fetishistic/kinky things for horse play here is a neat facet. Admittedly, with the idea of a bit and bridle, I am getting an image of Rarity back in a 'Vegas show girl/Cloudsdale outfit' too, so it was effective.
I like that line quite a bit as a sort of 'shame based' reversal too, once more flipping over the whole aspect of animal and superior (whichever the superior species may be). It just works nice as an early solidification that seems nice and complete.
As a completely unrelated note, I do love Rarity's use of the word 'villein'; not only is it nice and theatrical, but it's also a bit of a fun contradition (given a villein is a person legally tied to a master, which is exactly what she tried to make him).
+++Adeptus Grammaticus+++
The only thing that I could really find overall was one little instance that felt a little more 'tell' than 'show'.
The first part is just a touch forward, the second part is excellent and evocative, so it seems like a contrast. Especially when we have a really good example of conveying something like that already:
It's couched very nicely in that it's felt rather than merely spoken and there's a reaction to it.
There's not a lot more for me to say, grammatically and linguistically it's still nice and flowing and I wasn't hung up too much with anything. It really did deliver what it promised and it was just a really solid not to mention very fun story to read. Well done
Amazing work. You got Rarity's persona down pact which was awesome. The way you portrayed her having the internal conflict going through her mind on what Pinkie said is just like her obsessing over every little detail
. Fantastic work once again with the human protagonist utilizing the 2nd-person arc transition from calm to confusion/anger to subm--.aggressive?!... whoa Table turner!: Needless to say I was wondering just how well it can play out and It was an amazing 
to the events that transpired.
Excellent work from start to finish dood!
P.S Had this song playing right after the Table turner ^^ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eOV90Ba1N74
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I humbly request more
I like this story. 8/10
This was kind of fun. I liked the role reversal and domineering fun this one showed, even if rarity using magic roofies makes me a little... concerned. Still, this was violent, lustful, and loaded with debauchery. I loved it.
4307598 fuck you, I'm WALKING to hell, who needs to die anyways?
You know, I find it a bit disappointing that you would have Rarity mention Anon 'bathing Sweetie in his musk' and not do anything like that to Rarity.
im so sad its complete
Goddamn, but that was hot.
4326661 Agreed.
Well.....fuck. As hot as usual. damn the kinks I have.
Always love reading your stuff Hand-Made!
Damn this was hot
Wow, if I must say, this story is so hot it's downright Scandalous.
That is all .__.
God Damn you always write the best clop~
never has the word master[/q] been more exciting. leaving a fave and a like.
Ahh a good old fashion sub/dom clop.
I love those with a passion.
Please do more in this story!
*clop clop clop*
this was a good story i hope you make a sequel i would like to see how Rarity adapts to her new role as "your" obediant marefriend
4307865 I believe the proper term is, "Me likey."
I request More as well Please
All I can say is...
So fucking good.
This REALLY needs a sequel!
This part of the intro still gets me everytime i read it XD
Just saying, BDSM (or any sexual encounter for that matter) without first establishing rules for consent and the forfeiture of that consent is dangerous at best and rape at worst.
6353065
I agree, and a prequel with Twilight.
6669 words.
Perfection.