Diamond Gold

by Super Spike

Alternate Epilogue

Dear Princess Celestia,

Today, I learned about tolerating others and being yourself. When I first got turned into a colt, I was scared beyond belief. But then I made a lot of friends at school and learned that it doesn't matter who or what you are. Thanks to my new friends, I have become a much better pony. In the end, I decided to stay as a colt because I want to continue trying out what I had become. I'm glad that I learned how to be a better pony and I hope to continue bettering myself, as well as others.

Warmest Regards,

Diamond Gold

Diamond Gold sat on his bed and smiled, as he finished writing the letter and tied it using a ribbon. He then turned to Spike.

"Hey Spike," he said. "Even though you're not a dragon anymore, can you still send this letter?"

"Of course, Diamond Gold," Spike answered. "My mom taught me how to by using my horn."

"Are you sure it will work?" Diamond Gold asked, feeling a bit worried.

"Of course it will," Spike answered. "I tested it on one yesterday and another one was sent to Celestia via teleportation on my mom's desk within about five minutes stating that it worked."

"Cool," Diamond Gold responded.

Using his horn, he made the letter disappear.

"Now come on," Spike said. "We have a party to attend to outside."

With that said, the two foals ran downstairs and out to the back patio, where they enjoyed the party with all of the other students from their class. Diamond Gold was happy to be whom he was and and felt ready to take on any future adventures that he would encountered, now that he had become a better pony and had a nice family and many friends that were looking out for him.

Comments

[Super Spike]

9476979
You're right about that.

[Super Spike]

9476986
Actually, Colt-Man is Pac-Man.

[Super Spike]

9481410
You’re right about that.

[Silent Wing]

Nice story, but i think that you could have done better in my opinion. For my taste the story goes a bit more smothly and cause of that you wasted a bit potential. For example i think that most ponies are a bit to accepting, like Spolied Rich for example. I understand that you want a peacefull ending, but maybe put a bit more drama into it. Also i think that DT/DG should struggle a bit more, before she comes to tearms with they situation she is in.

What i really liked is that you gave two different endings, not many autors do that by similar stories, but i also think that they are a bit to close to each other.

All in all it was good work and please thinks at least about my words.

Kind regards SW