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Clopficsinthecomments


I want nothing more than to bring a smile to your face with a light-hearted clopfic! If you want to bring a smile to mine, leave a comment!

Comments ( 45 )

Think mebbe you forgot the sex tag there! :twilightblush:

Where's the cover art from though? 🤔

8506590
Thanks! Just put it in.


8506611
I can't link it because its a snip of a NSFW image... suffice to say maybe try punching in the number 851509 at a popular pony-related image site.

Why is the story in the Human in Equestria group?

Loved it! I see you put Cheerilee at about 22... Can I ask why?

8506801
Mistake... Was doing a bunch of updates of my other HiE stuff and accidentally stuck this one in... How can I pull it out?

8506812
I always put her at about Rarity's age? I think in one of the flashbacks you see Cheerilee as a foal in Rara's class, and I always had Rarity as maybe a year or so older than the other girls. I know there's a lot of theory craft around this though.

8507147
Hmm? The age guessing? Guess so... People do like to know how old the chara's are, so you can't blame em.

As a female myself...

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... DAYUM. :heart:

Good stuff, as always

8507522
Nice to get your stamp of approval!

8507561
Which pic? The cover snip is an artist named 326.
The pic the fic is based on is by mysticalalpha


8507718
Thank you!

Great, now I'm gunna start shipping cheerilee and filthy rich for a while. I wanna see a sequel now

8508118
Hahaha, I know what you mean, even as I finished this fic I wanted more from our feisty little teacher.

That being said there are plenty more ponies in Ponyville... Lots more to explore!

8507743
I'm definitely reading more of your stuff! :heart:

8509206
Thanks! Leave lots of comments, I'm not-so-secretly super addicted to feedback. :twilightsheepish:

8509915
... Ok maybe u could explain your comment a bit more: what shit is cancer asf?

8510965
Welp, guess I found out who the one dislike is thus far. Have a good one!:rainbowderp:

I've always had a thing for teachers.

I have mixed feelings about going hot for teacher. Must haz moar hot 4 teechur fics.

That part between Filthy coming in and Cherilee deciding to seduce him was kind of awkward.

8566880
Like how he thinks the scent of Cheerilee's heat is perfume. That sounds a little stupid.

8566883
OK, I see how you might not like that. People probably feel that estrus smell is different - a raw animalistic smell would be unmistakable for sure.

In my head-canon the smell is definitely powerful, but when perceived by a stallion they tend to think it smells great, and that it has overtones or undertones of other smells that might be related to the colorful pone emitting the smell.

Sorry if that ruined your experience!

8567115
The sex scene later was written well though.

8567599
Thank you! Appreciate both your negative and positive feedback very much, means you were engaged with the story!:pinkiehappy:

8567680
I rather think Cheerilee would want to have the conversation go normally in the beginning and try to suppress it. She didn't really seem to want to get a normal conversation going.

8567703
True, I was aiming to have things move along quickly, so I had her swept up almost immediately.

8567728
I wasn't saying her attempts would be successful but she would at least try.

I do enjoy cocktease cheerilee. Well done!

Cocktease Cheerilee is best Cheerilee. Seriously though, this was very well written, very hot, and the teasing was fantastic. Not a whole lot of writers seem to do teasing well, but you always do splendid. Easily a favorite.

Got to love those hard working mares. Good going Cheerilee! Go get yours!:moustache:

MOW

8566883

Like how he thinks the scent of Cheerilee's heat is perfume. That sounds a little stupid.

Considering humans' idea of perfume is to smell like the behind of a musk deer ...

8537469
We need more samples. Uhm, for science.

8868942
That is still a foreign smell.

Second best I've read from you, your HiE threesome still stands in first place, keep up the amazing work

8868942
A musk deer is still a foreign smell. Humans are extremely attuned to human scents and so they would recognize it instantly.

8567728
The story would be hotter if Cheerilee tries and fails to suppress her arousal. It would also be funny to see her be that awkward.

I know this is one of your older fics but I just found it and I must say, I quite like it! I love all your stories and I look forward to each and every one of them!

9634498
Wow, thank you! Rare to get comments in my oldest stories but I still love to see them!

9634649
I have naught to add to this discussion

10673333
I love your beagle! I have three.

10673425
To be honest, this picture isn’t of my beagle, it’s actually a friends beagle wearing my hat

Would there be a chance that it gets a sequel sometime in the future. Cuz this is a nice and so rare paring.

Honestly, good for them both. Gotta have fun sometimes!

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