This story is a sequel to Thunderstorm and the Four Winds
Hey Scoots! I want you to meet my gramps!
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Yeah! He's the one who told me the story of Thunderstorm and the Four Winds. You know the one where I told you?
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Ow! OW! OW! Stop it Gramps! No! I didn't do the "Voice".
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Ow! What do you mean I'm not doing it right if I'm not doing the "Voice"? I just told it to her my way.
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OW! Stop hitting me! Fine! Hey, Scoots! My Gramps wants to tell you the sto-OW! Thunder-OW! The Epic of Thunderstorm and the Four Winds! Sit down! Now stop hitting me Gramps!
Featured 4/23/2017! My First Future! Thanks Carabas for allowing me to pupblish this.
Chapters (1)
Carabas refered this story!
I believe you meant West Wind here.
Missed a W in Wind.
This story has most assuredly earned both the "Epic" and Carabas' endorcement. Have my like and a fave.
To those reading the comments before the story, don't be turned off by the "unusual" format. You will find the work flows amazingly well and it actually adds a LOT to the feel of the work. My hat is off to the author for not only pulling it off, but making it glorious in the process.
"THe pegasi?"
"The"?
"over vas plains"
"vast"?
"was where she found The North Wind,"
"West"?
"But their is one we all"
"there"?
"it canbe done"
"can be"?
""“I suggest"
Should those quotation marks be absent?
"Gloomy Sothern Sea"
"Southern"?
"The South ind"
"Wind"?
"since she had first began her journey"
"begun"?
"A pegasi couldn't fly"
"pegasus"?
"mountain wherer it still"
"where"?
"He double the already heavy"
"doubled"?
"danced arond all the"
"around"?
"" “Leap now"
Should that first quotation mark not be there?
"THunderstorm reached the peak"
"Thunderstorm"?
Very nice!
A must for any pegasus hero.
Suitably epic in all senses of the word. Thank you for it.
8116026 Thank you so much.