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Shadowmane PX-41

Just your average british lad. I write things for a living. It’s the strangest living you’ll ever find, second only to my inability to take myself off of the grid.

Shadowmane PX-41 Joined 21st Sep, 2013 · Offline

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Lemon Zest. Fun-loving headbanger, proud CPA student, and now elf queen? Something is clearly wrong here...

The art belongs solely to Pixelkitties, if one couldn’t tell.
Chapters (1)
Complete Published: Oct 29th, 2017 Download
5,148 words
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The Bricklayer
The Bricklayer #2 · Oct 29th, 2017 · · ·
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"So... is nobody going to bring up the fact that I was nearly shot with bows and arrows?" She asked thin air.

That ending line...:rainbowlaugh: God, this was hilarious! Great work!

GildedSteel
GildedSteel #3 · Oct 29th, 2017 · · ·
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Random as hell. How fun? Just the light read I was feeling like.

Starlight Nova
Starlight Nova #4 · Oct 29th, 2017 · · ·
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What does Alkar ana Her Majestime mean in English?

FourShadow
FourShadow #6 · Oct 30th, 2017 · · ·
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"So... is nobody going to bring up the fact that I was nearly shot with bows and arrows?"

Nope!:trollestia::raritywink:

FanOfMostEverything
FanOfMostEverything #7 · Nov 7th, 2017 · · ·
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I'm pretty sure you meant to put that author's note above the main story. Right now, it's below it. Just a heads up.

In any case, this was certainly entertaining. I do like a good Shadowbolt story, especially one with Lemon Zest doing Lemon Zest things. I felt your Sugarcoat was a bit too demonstrative, but that may just be a matter of opinion. Personally, I can't see her shouting for anything less than the end of the world. Still, overall, this was a surprising amount of fun.

Oh, and one last thought:

She felt the back of her ears and how rigid and sharpened they had become "—Oh my gosh, Lemon! I have pointy elf ears!"

"Also, they've gone numb. Is that normal?"
"Yup."
"... how many different colors of elf ears do you have on you, anyway?"
"Under this breastplate, it's like forty percent plastic by volume. I am the Sherwin-Williams of elvish accessories."

MJP
MJP #8 · Jul 12th, 2018 · · ·
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now i REALLY want to write a story where Lemon Zest (or someone else) is an actual elf

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