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Pathious II


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Sunset Shimmer, a very powerful unicorn. The once-proud student of Princess Celestia herself, Outcast herself many years ago to a world much unknown. She had underwent many triumphs and failures upon being there. However once she had decided to return after her defeat against Twilight Sparkle things would never be the same. With every evil there is good, with every good there is also evil. Sunset Shimmer would soon find out is that her Darkness is much more than she had first anticipated.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

This sounds pretty good. I can't wait to read more.

Interesting. But you definitely need an editor.

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Just out of curiosity, but are you German?

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Considering I wrote this all on a phone. I think I did pretty darn good.

Wait. WHY IS THERE TWO VERSIONS OF THIS STORY AND TWO PEOPLE CALLED "PATHIOUS" ??? :twilightoops::derpyderp1::applejackconfused:

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As explained I had written this in another count before and I wanted to give it a better chance. The first one was too rushed for me but I still appreciate it and didn't want to delete it.

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