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Such A Chlorbag


Sweetie Belle in the streets, Scootaloo in the sheets.

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Twilight Sparkle has been going to Canterlot High for a while now, and her first Halloween with friends is almost upon her. At the request of Pinkie Pie, the girls agree to have a fun night of Trick-or-Treating, candy, and lots of scares! But there's something Twilight wants more than all the costumes and candy in the world, and her name is Sunset Shimmer. She just has to work up the courage to talk to her!


Costumes in artwork not indicative of actual story

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 50 )

Bring a pet huh? Knowing Sci-Twi she'll bring Spike.

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You know, I actually had that exact thing in mind while I was writing this story. Think I'm gonna go with something like that!

ok can someone help me out about the over art I know Twilight is a Mad scientist and Sunset is a he-Devil and i think pinkie is a witch form left for Dead but I cant make heads or tails what Fluttershy and the others are

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Applejack is a witch, Rarity is a cat-woman, Rainbow is a zombie, Twilight is a mad scientist, Pinkie is either a zombie (like the Witch from L4D) or a possessed girl like in The Evil Dead, Fluttershy is a vampire (you can see the blood on her fangs, and is a reference to the vampire pony Fluttershy turned into), and Sunset is a devil/demon, referencing the demon she can turn into.

Again, the characters won't actually dress like that in the story.

8464544
Scratch that, I actually looked it up. Applejack is Marisa Kirisame from the Touhou video game series, and Pinkie Pie is a "psychopath." The rest are correct.

wow scitwi didnt have a heart attack at getting called cute im proud of her

Ok I need some help understanding why there arnt more chapters of this master piece

8466189
Thank you so much! The plan is a new chapter each Tuesday of this month, with the last chapter landing on Halloween.

8466199
Seeing as Princess Twilight isn't listed in the tags I'm gonna assume she's too busy with Nightmare Night to join Sunset and the gang?

8466354
I kinda want her to come and show interest in sunset just to see some jealousy with scitwi

Enjoying this so far, can't wait to see where it goes :)

8467008
Thank you! I hope you’ll like it.

“SHE THINKS I’M CUTE!”

Simmer down there, Rudolph

“Okay okay okay,” Pinkie interrupted. “Let’s go down the line. Rainbow, what did you do last Halloween?”

You missed Sunset. I was expecting an awkward "...Planning my conquest of Equestria..."

All in all, a good start. Interested to see where it goes.

“Um,” Pinkie put a finger to her chin, “I know of a barn house my old uncle died in once. But I don’t think his ghost is there.”

Rainbow: Once?
Pinkie: Yeah, he's died a bunch of times! That was his third, I think - his first was at sea and his second was in traffic.
Applejack: Uh huh, sure, Pinks. So, anyway...
Pinkie: The next three times were all in his bedroom - he caught something really nasty, it was a real mess cleaning up his body every time.
Rarity: Er, Pinkie, dear, if you could just...
Pinkie: Then there was the piano, the cliff, the scorpion, the lightning, the piano again, the sinkhole, the collapsing wall and the fireworks display... Ooh, that was a good one!
Sunset: Um...
Pinkie: To enjoy other times he died, please turn this Pinkie to side B
All: ...
Fluttershy: Um, could we not do tha-
Twilight: Yes. Yes we can!

Was going to use emoticons instead of names, but the site lacks a Sunset one. A terrible oversight to be sure.

8467205
Wow, you’re right. Totally blanked on that. I might go back and fix that now. Regardless, thanks for the tip and for the interest! Hope you like the rest!

That ending DDDAAAAWWWWW!:rainbowkiss:

8467205
Oh my god Rudolf was my first thought after the second time she said it! LOL

Really hope you continue this! So far twilight is adorkable and I love the inner thoughts. It's amazing! Hehe, Rudolph...

8472995
Thank you very much! Sorry I didn’t reply quickly, I was actually out watching the movie!

New chapter on Tuesday, if all goes as planned.

8473613
Awesome! I cant wait to read it! SciSet has to be my favorite mom ship.
I want to see the movie so bad. Fun fact, I met my best friend because I recognized his pinkie pie reference. His birthday is on tuesday!

8473631
That’s awesome! I met one of my best friends through ponies, too. I know I’ve never met him, but tell your friend I said happy birthday!

How on earth are you making your alfredo sauce? 'Cause as a roughly even mixture of butter, cheese, and heavy cream I've never found it to be anything one could describe as sticky or sugary.

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I’ve had it with sugar in it to make it slightly sweet. And it’s stuck because it’s dried to the plate, not because it’s sticky.

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If you use the proper amount of butter it'll never stick to anything under any circumstances I've experienced. As for the sugar, I guess there's no accounting for taste?

Rainbow took off the helmet and began scanning the lineup as she placed it back on its hook. “Let’s see, we got all the usual stuff. Godzilla, Skele-seer, Carnival Cat, evil clown—Pinkie would like that one—bloody hockey mask—is . . . is that William Shatner?”

Wow, all your missing is a knife glove and you'd have the trinity of Slasher film references.

good chapter loved the friday the 13th and halloween movie references

thoe i cant see rainbow dash not being a star wars fan she loves stuff like that

also for some reason this update did not show up in my feed

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Oh really I didn’t know they made an OJ Simpson movie

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Glad you caught that!

And yeah, at least in my head cannon, this Rainbow is pre-the equivalent of Read it and Weep for Equestria Girls, so she hasn’t accepted the nerdy life yet. But I totally get what you mean.

Thanks for reading, though! Also, it’s strange that you didn’t get notified. Can anyone else vouch for that? Am I doing something wrong?

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she plays video games that is a nerdy thing

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Yeah, that’s true. But it’s also kind of an athlete thing nowadays.

Whatever, man, I’m just making stuff up as I go along. I like the nerd/not nerd dynamic between the two of them.

8479758 I meant Freddy Kreuger:

cdn.costumewall.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/02/freddy-krueger.jpg

I mean you put in references to the other iconic slasher movie villains.

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Haha I know. I was making a joke. :ajsmug:

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hope im not coming off as argumentitive

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I know you're not. :raritywink: Just explaining my methods.

In case anybody was wondering, there will be no update today for two reasons:

1. I was stupid and can't count. I thought October only had four Tuesdays, not five, so I was planning on one chapter per Tuesday and the last one landing on Halloween.
2. Point one doesn't matter anyway, because school has been heating up and chapter three isn't even finished yet.

I still want Chapter 3 & 4 to release a week away from each other and end on Halloween, so I'm skipping this week and will continue to publish next Tuesday. Hope to see you then!

Ooh I'm really enjoying this story so far. I love the interactions Twilight has and how well written she and her friends are. Keep up the good work and let the SunLight shine!

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Thank you kindly! I’m working on Chapter 3 now.

This story is just wonderful! I love the interactions between Sunset and Twilight, they’re just so cute! ScitwiShimmer is my OTP! (I super wish Hasbro would just make it canon already haha). The inner thoughts are great, this whole chapter was great! I love this so far and hope you keep it going :twilightsmile: I can’t wait to read more :pinkiehappy:

I loved this! The one on one with Rainbow was excellent! Keep it up, you’ve got a dedicated reader in me. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for both of your kind comments! I, too, want SciTwi X Sunset to be canon, although I know it most likely will never be. Guess that's what fanfictions are for! I'm very glad I've got a dedicated reader in you. The last two updates have been late and slow (obviously, as Halloween has long been over) primarily because of school getting in the way of my free time. However, my last paper for the semester is going to be over with Tuesday, and then I'll have a five day weekend to myself due to Thanksgiving. If all goes as planned, chapter 3 will come out somewhere in there. Thank you for your patience, and I hope to see you there!

Really enjoying this, and the pairing could still happen. As long as the series continues, there's hope. :pinkiehappy:

A next up: Enter SciSet!!!

Besides, once we got to Canterlot High, we’d all have our own thing to do once we got there.”

Brought to you by the Department of Redundancy Department

Gosh, so stupid! “Oh, uh nothing. It’s nothing. Gosh, why did I even—it’s nothing. Forget I even said that.” She hid her face in her hands. “Wow. That was embarrassing.” Why, why, WHY?! Could you be not awkward for, like, FIVE minutes?

Not be*

Side note: Your avatar make sure me think of this picture:
i.imgur.com/ZegXV5D.jpg

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Thank you kindly! Consider both instances fixed. Also, I quite enjoy the cat picture.

This is so cute! Please continue :pinkiehappy:

8997696
I’m working on it! Life and school have gotten in the way, but I’ve got a big part of the next chapter already written up. Hopefully, it will be released sometime soon.

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