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A few days have passed since Tirek was defeated and Twilight was named the Princess of Friendship. Now with a huge burden of responsibility bestowed upon her, Twilight is depressed and unable to sleep. Getting up to assist Spike with his own issues, Twilight may find that she is the one in need of help.
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Nice little story.
Just a little typo...
Might want to fix that. Other than that I'm just disappointed that I can't like and favorite this story more than once!
Cheers, Null
I applaud you good sir. 4/5
- Twilight's normally a mare.
This was moving enough to shake me and deep enough to fall in. Thank you. Thank you so much.
4701703
The truth has been revealed! *uses knock out gas"
4701928 Thank you very much for enjoying it!
4701248 Thank you kindly!
4701539 Thank you very much. And consider it fixed!
4701683 Thanks for enjoying it.
4701703 She is now! Thanks for the help!
4702161
So are they a couple here ?
Beautiful story my friend. I loved every detail I hope I can do more stories Twi / Spike
D'aww! Love this, man. Always love seeing interaction between Twilight and Spike. Good job.
4702715 No, just close friends.
4703006 Thank you so much! I hope so too.
4703154 Thanks a lot, man!
loved this!
4705566 Thank you!
A well-spun combination of D'awww and positive feels. Nicely done all around, and both characters were very much in character as well.
Have a 'stache and a fave!
No matter what we always need our friends to help keep life in perspective. Wonderful story.
Listened to Beat It will reading. The combo put me in a pretty good good!
This was quite sweet, and the author shows promise... and I downvoted it. It started well with a decent premise and a recognizable Twilight voice, and then
Mixing tenses is a venial sin, but one that I can't help but notice... and that's a bad thing. Whack, I'm slammed back into my skull, wincing. More generally, anything that draws the reader's focus away from the story is bad.
Judging by the up votes, very few people are this picky. Nevertheless, please check out this link.
4716657 Thank you for the good constructive criticism. It's something I'm working on.
As they drifted off to sleep Spike spoke up " Oh that part of Forgetting Rarity? I might by wrong about that Twi."
Twi light giggled "Oh Spike, Who can forget your first crush?"
Pinkies voice echoed through the room "FOREVER!"
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depends upon the universe
4818518 Hence my use of the "normally" qualifier.
4819307 I know, I just couldn't resist
4819392 I was actually expecting someone to bring up Dusk Shine.
I've built my life on friendship and reading books
I don't know those wings I see in the crystal's shine
Now everything that I've had
And everything I've known have been blown to bits
And these days I find that I have too much time
I-I-I've fought with Tirek
Seen all the strife that was invo-o-olved
Tears of the broken
Have strengthened my resolve
Pushed by compassion
To bring the giant down
The whole world is well now
And I've earned my fancy crown
I've tried my best to get to sleep
But He's haunting me in my dreams
Please break my shackles
I want it to STOP
Get some box fans. Beautiful white noise to help one sleep.
Viewing oneself objectively is trickier than you'd think. If you look at yourself in the mirror, and say, "Damn, I'm awesome," that's not objective.
If you look at yourself and say, "Damn, I suck," that's not objective either.
When you see yourself and say, "Damn, if I'm getting hung up on self-image, I should probably talk to someone who knows me," THAT'S an objective assessment.
4821711 I'm glad you caught that reference. Thought it was too vague.
4821908 Didn't even know that was intentional. Good work.
This was very nice, heartfelt really. Good characterization, nice subject, good grammar and the rare trait of actually fixing mistakes and typos readers are kind enough to point out, way to bring it all together. Excellent work.
Also love how Rarity got a few hundred years of Spike's memory over everyone but Twilight, ya know, maybe. Even he didn't toss out the possibility of never forgetting her
A good story, but I'm not so great at the comment thing.
Something that has always really annoyed me is the fact that Twilight never gets any credit with the Crystal Heart. She was the one who figured out where it was, used the corrupting black magic to get to the stairs leading up to the heart, and was eve n the reason her and Spike were able to reach the Heart in time. Compared to what she did, Spike's part was miniscule, but she doesn't even get a bit of acknowledgment. It annoys me...
4824175 I agree with you, but I put that because that's how I think Spike feels about it. Not necessarily everyone else.
I know, it's just a trend people started and it's hard to change something like that after it gets rolling. Plus, it doesn't help that they're like that in the actual show.
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I live in a castle that gleams.
Day in, day out, the shining wears on my brain!
Undermining my sanity.
Makin' me question my reality.
But life is not what it seems,
Should I take a chance of freedom,
and throw it all down the drain?
I've been promoted,
Please burn all my lessons away!
I'm sick of learning
Sick of thinking it's all I dooooo
I love those around me
those hated are very feewww
But the bright sun is burning
And my sky shines Everbluuue
Friendships surround me
I'm becoming a part of yoooouu
Nice story and I really love the cover art
Delete the marked word.
4826769 You skipped the whole second verse and went straight to the... end-y bit. That bugs the hell out of me for some reason.
4827973 Thank you.
4829773
"*Squee* I changed it!"
Wonderful feel-good story, and another good example of the kind of characterization Spike needs in the show. He had a lot more wit and competence in the first two seasons than he does now.
Sometimes, though, you really don't need to pun something up with a horse-related word.
I actually registered an account just to comment on this story. That is how much I loved it. Seriously it made me....
4888550 Thank you so much!
This was a wonderful and touching story. I loved it.
Very nice story. Great job!
6957366 Why thank you! I aim to please!
Oh, for the heady, optimistic days after Season 4. By this point all Twilight's fears are confirmed and Spike's hopeful words are revealed as pretty lies.
7411958 Yeah, I made it a point to get this one out before season five. Barely made it, but I guess it was good enough. Thanks for the Follow!