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Moon's Adventures: Act 1

Hello! Join me on my adventures of saving ponyville time and time again. And adventures with the apple trees here and there.

taste the rainbow!

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Chapter 1: Arriving in Ponyville · 4th Oct 2017 · 3,508 words
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Chapter 2: Moms and Muffins · 5th Oct 2017 · 1,709 words
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Mulberry Blaze

Mulberry Blaze #1 · Oct 8th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1: Arriving in Ponyville ·

Might I suggest you focus on the little details? I find potential is this plot, but things seem a little fast paced...
But what do I know about writing stories?

HappyMoon

HappyMoon #2 · Oct 8th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1: Arriving in Ponyville ·

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Im not really good at writing slow-paced stories, considering this is my first story.

Mulberry Blaze

Mulberry Blaze #3 · Oct 8th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2: Moms and Muffins ·

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Yeah I'm working on my first official story as well
I'll keep close tabs on your progress though!

HappyMoon

HappyMoon #4 · Oct 8th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2: Moms and Muffins ·

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*gasp* I forgot to finish this chapter!

Mulberry Blaze

Mulberry Blaze #5 · Oct 8th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2: Moms and Muffins ·

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While I'm waiting for you to finish your chapter would you be interested in reading mine? The password is RDIBPR if you're interested: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/380565/dimensions

"Upon discovering magical energy excluding the Relic exist, Aloe" (My original character) "sets off on a portal-hopping journey across the stars to find the source of this energy. She soon discovers all magic doesn't exclusively come from machines."

HappyMoon

HappyMoon #6 · Nov 27th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2: Moms and Muffins ·

Actually, I'm going to remove the adult parts. I'm just not a person who writes that kind of stuff, so this chapter has had a HUGE setback, and it might take a while to recover.