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Comrade Bagel Muffin


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This story is a sequel to School Letter


Sequel to School Letter.
Pumpkin and Pound Cake are having their finale exams for the fall semester. Which also Correspond with a special day for the two of them. Now after one of their test the two twins just relax.

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This really is just a slice of life story, but it's cute and fun seeing these two characters aged up and see their relationship. That all felt pretty real, although I wouldn't recommend always capitalizing their (many) nicknames, although that seems to be a character quirk for Pumpkin.
There were some typos and grammar errors (I think you meant to say runes, not ruins) and there were a few weird little bits (like putting candles on an unwrapped cake, apparently) but I liked it.
Short and sweet :pinkiesmile:

Nice, you really showed gow they care for each other

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