Nightmare Moon somehow outsmarted Celestia and gained control of all of Equestria. She now rules with an iron hoof, causing all ponies to live in a sunless world. Come and join me as i tell you how i came to fall in love with this frightening mare, and the life i have lived with her.
i do like where this is going!!!!
you get a spike stash from me
1st. lol
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I'm so glad you're enjoying it~ hehe
"I could have sworn I saw a smirk replace her permanent scowl."
>Rape.
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>.> maybe~ kukukukuku
912482 more
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haha i'm working on the second chapter right now, but i'm also watching my baby sister, so it will either be late tonight or tomorrow when it's up
I expect force intercourse! NOW
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>u> i hope you aren't dissapointed~ but if you are, i could always send rarity over~ "Bend over." x3
912551 I see, good luck with this fic!
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Thank you~
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really now?
This is a rather interesting story... i love it!
personally, i love how Celestia gets her just deserts. Center of the sun... Great idea...
this is offcially of interest for the party
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Well she can't live ON the sun, so she gets to BE the sun.
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i love parties
I really love the idea! keep going! I hope to see the next chapter soon!
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I'm working on chapter two at the moment~ but i haven't been able to fully commit easily, i've been babysitting
Anyways, i'm glad you like it!
I liked this chapter too but, at the beginning you said Pegasus then at the end you said Alicorn. Alicorn is correct but Pegasus... sorry if you didn't want any constructive criticism or whatever it is....
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The Alicorn is Nightmare Moon, and the character is a Pegasus...sorry if i confused you >.<
I like where this is going!
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oho you~ peeking in on their love life~
The party is pleased, for now
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oh good~ hehe
We need more also good job.
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haha, i'm working on it~ and thank you c:
we need a luna or NMM version of
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I'm not quite sure that i understand...
NMM is epic troll
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ohh~ i understand now~
Good chapter, looking forward to more
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I'm so glad you liked it! i'll be working on the next one.
keep up the good work
have a happy derpy
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I will
Very nice chapter!
Take your time i'd rather read quality work than lots of stuff thrown together.
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Thank you c:
I have one thing to say to your character.
*Ahem*
RRRAPE THE BITCH!!!
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Technically, Nightmare will be doing the raping
And when that happens, i won't be able to go into detail if i want to keep the rating at pg-13
aww. oh well. besides i'm not that much into clop. i just want to know if it was going to happen.
though it would be interesting if they switched roles (he took charge and she submitted) ... oh god now i can't get the image out of my head.968069
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aha Taint is a mare, dove ^^;
970709 wait what? i thought it was a guy!
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ahaha no~ I'm afraid that Taint is a girl.
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Oh? Hmm. Farewell then.
Is it just me, or did the story just now mention she was a mare?
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I had a hint in the first chapter...i haven't done a very good job of showing she wasn't a stallion
wait its a mare :O
All i have to say is
DUH DUH DUUUUUUUHHHHH
what a twist!!!!!!!!
Strange? I thought she was a stallion?
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A lot of people did, i need to do a better job and showing she's a mare