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Creativa-Artly01


Epileptic-autistic eldest of four, artist, creative, and horse crazy girl who is obsessed with entertainment media and history among other things.

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After learning about Apple Bloom's love for Tender Taps, Sweetie and Scootaloo try to set up the perfect date for their friend. All they can do now, is hold their breath and hope their plan to get the two together doesn't backfire in their face like the Cheerilee incident with Apple Bloom's big brother.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 5 )

Well, this story isn't bad, but the writing feels kind of like an essay rather than a story. It's simply stating everything, no description at all, and the relationship happened too easily. I don't mean this to be offensive, I'm just trying to help you. If you'd like, I maybe could help with editing and revising? :unsuresweetie:

Thanks. I'll keep that in mind when I start writing the next chapters. Thanks for the tip.

What's coming up?

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You'll have to wait and see. I'm not going to spoil anything in the comments. I hope you understand.

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