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Freewing Alchemist P


Hard worikng Writer. Likes to read stories and Impove his skills. Has a strange sences of humor, don't hold it against me.

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Pumpkin and Pound have grown up and made their own lives.
While Pumpkin started another Sugar cub Connors in Appleloosa, Pound stayed in Ponyville to help his family.
One day Carrot Cake suffers from a heart attack and the twins must come together to help out until he recovers. After discovering may things have changed, many changes, some not so good, Pumpkin is distressed and tries to fix the problems. This puts her at odds with her brother Pound and the ways he's dealing with the problems The two of them must overcome the issues that caused there divide and help their family thought this trying time.

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Comments ( 5 )

Interesting story so far, I like seeing how things will go for the cake twins a few years down the road.

The description has missing letters. So, I can safely assume the story does as well. Sounds like a good melodrama 'though.

8385957Yes, though I've lost most of the chapters I wrote with this one it will take me a while to rewrite.
You see I was trying to have some one proof read it but they ended up deleting a lot of my other chapters.

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Sorry to hear that, still it is an interesting story, and I hope to see another chapter of it again.

Also the first comment that you see was done months ago, in late August; Well, better late then never:rainbowlaugh:

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