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Freewing Alchemist P


Hard worikng Writer. Likes to read stories and Impove his skills. Has a strange sences of humor, don't hold it against me.

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This story is a sequel to The Monkey and the Jellyfish, The Day at the Beach


Ms. Cheerilee asked the Only human in Ponyville for a favor,
It's simple, Bring Silver Spoon home to her parents, but there is a little more to that then it seems.
Silver Spoon isn't looking forward to it because she and Diamond Tiara were in deep trouble.
Seeing that there may be more to here then what other ponies see, The storyteller decides to tell her a story in hopes to change her future.

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Comments ( 7 )

Awesome story:twilightsmile::yay:

Totally cool

4890203 4890220 I am glad you liked it thank you.:twilightsmile:
4891519 Thank you for pointing it out I would say they are more like grammar mistakes because a spell check would not pick them up they were other words. I believe I got some of them but not all thanks for showing me where to start. :twilightsmile:

I would recommend rereading the story to fix some of the errors there are but other then that is a great story I hope you keep working on it

4895164 Thanks for your help.
I know I miss some errors no matter how many times I reread but thank you none the less. this story is a one-shot but I like to fix what I can about it. I also have other I want to work on too.

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