As Luna prepares to conduct her nightly duties, she receives a surprise visitor.
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Interesting, might as well throw it on the shelf.
Complete? What the hell, man? I want to know who visited Luna
I half expected it to turn out to be chrysalis until they entered the dreamscape.
Loony, ya gotta realize ponies can't stay up 24/7. Twilight did that once for a few days... she ended up going through time and creating a bootstrap paradox as a result. Ya don't want more of that. Trust me on this one.
8324239 One would think Chrysalis... but with Chrysalis out for vengeance, why would she exhibit the emotions she did? Why would she fail to utilize the opportunity to take the revenge she promised when last we saw her? And why would her appearance remain Celestia in the dream realm, where as far as we know Chrysalis has zero experience and would have no idea how to disguise herself in a mental form?
My problem with this story is... there is no possible answer. It's completely open-ended. There's nary a hint of what's really going on.
As such, it feels like a story fragment... perhaps the prologue of a story introducing what will become the central conflict.
Alt time line where the banishment has just occurred.
8326721 Close, very close.
I loved this story. The mystery was quite compelling.
I put my vote as an alternate reality where Luna was killed by the elements not just banished.