I woke up in a bed. A nice fluffy bed. As soon as I open my eyes I see lavender eyes.
"AGGHHH," I scream leaping back.
Oh good you're awake. The other elements are worried sick of you," she said in a relieved voice and falling into a chair on the side.
I take a look around my surroundings and finally realized where I was. The hospital. Then as I started to lie back down what Twilight said. The other elements are worried sick of me? Rage filled my body as I thought about what happened at the picnic a couple days ago.
"The elements are "WORRIED"! Sure they are, I should believe you after you LIED to me at the picnic?" I yelled in her face.
"What picnic, oh that one. Derpy we're really sorry.Rainbow Dash just didn't want anybody joining in"
"SURE YOU ARE"
Oh Derpy are you yeling because of me? I'm sorry Derpy," whispered a quiet voice in the corner.
"Oh sorry for yelling Fluttershy. It's not your fault."
"Oh, thank Celestia you're not mad. I brought your favorite. Muffins!"
"As I started to calm down and eat the muffins i feel something cold on my neck.
It was a necklace with a bubble in the middle. A mixture of emotions went through me, but mostly confusion.
"What is this?"
"Oh Derpy, That's what I was going to tell you. At first I didn't know but then she told me it was an element. You're the last element, the element of Bravery. The guardian of the elements," she said in an excited breath
I didn't know what to feel happy sad or both but then Pinkie Pie burst through the door.
"WHO WANTS TO PARTY!"
So many misplaced quotation marks
Wow, that was quite a plot twist. I was not expecting that. Nice job.
There are a few issues with quotation marks here and there, but that can be easily tweaked. There are a few issues with present tense, like how in the first paragraph it should be opened and saw.
I also like how you incorporated the picnic back in. You explained why they turned Derpy away, which I like. While I am still surprised they would act this way, I take back what I said earlier about changing the mane6. They and their not so nice behavior work very well with your story. Nice job on that.
A very interesting way to end the chapter. I enjoyed reading your story.