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You're doing good so far. Keep it up.
Hm. Not bad. I think I'll keep an eye on this one.
You may want to mark it as incomplete if you're planning to do more.
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Thanks for that! Just changed it. Originally planned for this to be a one shot, but I got way caught up in the dream sequence.
Have changed it to 'incomplete'
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Right on!
Definitely understand the 'meant for this to be a one-shot' feeling. Keep up the good work.
I like it, except for one, huge, immersion-destroying, super-distracting, and completely redundant thing.
Coloured text.
I know who is speaking without colours. I am over 18, I can read sex without a colour clue telling me who is getting fucked. You don't see it in any work of fiction (that is great) on this site. If you need it, then you aren't giving enough information on who is speaking. If it isn't needed, then don't have it.
This next point isn't a criticism as much as personal preference. I want to find out who originally though dream sequences written in italics was a good idea and smack em. A load of people don't care and I doubt it is going to show up in this fic again but I just dislike it. Just write about her squirming in bed, line break, dream sex, line break, wake up wetter than a lesbian in a taco factory. Done.
Still like the fic though. Following.
So far so good. The dialogues in colour takes some getting used to but I think I like it. The detail level feels just right, not too little nor too much, which keeps the story at a good pace.
Any plans on a bonus chapter about those 4 days shacking up with Spitfire, Soarin and Thunderlane?
You might want to change that link, I don't think the site allows nsfw links. I'm probably wrong and I don't want to seem like an ass I just don't want you to get in trouble.
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I changed it from a link to a number, better safe than sorry. Thanks!
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Thanks guys, appreciate the feedback. I'll be the first to admit that the colored text is a bit of an experiment.
This account was made to write 'scribble-style' clopfics based on pictures I run across. I thought the audience if those sites might appreciate keeping the 'voices' visually distinct as well as being written distinctly.
If I keep finding that it clashes and causes a bit of a distraction I may discontinue.
On the dream sequence though, if it wasn't italics it'd be some other type of clear separator. Last thing you want in a clopfic is for your reader to get as lost as someone reading "House of Leaves" 😊
An amusing, but good start so far. Let's see how you handle the rest
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Welp, for once Angel tried to be helpful... but when you have tunnel vision, you don't really think clearly.
We're in for a wild ride!
... or, well, Rainbow is
Angel you magnificent bastard
But... this doesn't seem to have anything at all to do with my art... The picture I did with Rainbow Dash was about Anon walking in on her in a stable, tied up and ready to breed while she was in heat.
This just seems more about random lewd adventures of Rainbow Dash. 
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My goodness! I'm graced by a comment from on of my favorite artists/writers!!!
As I tried to note, I keep getting caught up in getting Dashie to the scene where she is tied up and waiting for Anon. I plan for that to occur next chapter, I promise!
I know the work is extremely lewd, and not really your usual style of well planned and story driven romance, for which I apologise. I am definitely the drunken one night stand compared to your beautiful relationships!
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Why do you tease me like this?! 
Nah, its not that. I like me some pure clop stories, but when I saw that this was inspired by my art, I was expecting to see some Anon x Rainbow baby making. But it hasn't been that at all.
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I've heard that teasing is half the fun.
Seriously though, Anon will get his romp next chapter, promise.
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yeah but... it should have been about Rainbow and Anon... so you should have set Anon up at the start.
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to be honest, all ive gleaned from this fic so far, is that Rainbow is a bit of a slut. Not the kind of thing you should open an AnonXdash fic with, as guess who most of the readers of anondash fics are?
interesting story, but I agree with pusspuss, it could have been written very differently.
Your concepts of breeding are weird...
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I'll admit I'm inclined to agree a little.
Plus Rainbow really doesn't seem like she'd be the kind to sleep around being Loyalty and all. If anything I would think she'd be the most likely to pick a single partner and stick with them in lieu of all others.
Of course I'm still curious to see where this story goes. It's been a while since I've run across a Rainbow + Anon/Human fic that's caught my attention, and combining inspired by Pusspuss with Rainbow Dash is certainly a good way to do it.
todaies forcast calls for extreme heat with high humility
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Hey guys, thanks for the feedback! Totally get where you're coming from. Is my raunch factor high? Yes!
Do I paint Dash as a slut? Ehhh debatable.
I definitely like to make reproductive biology in ponies so strong to the point that it nearly overcomes the more sapient mindstate. It's a kink of mine for sure.
That being said, even with this ramped up sexuality I'd like to note that my Dashie has only had an embarrassing wet dream (which she regrets), and has uncontrollably reacted to some stallions (which she also regrets). I think of those as more like random boners than any manifestation of true desire.
So, yeah I took a way different tack than Pusspuss - he's the master of writing a romance that makes your heart melt... but don't throw my Dashie under the bus yet! Mares in heat can get pretty lovey dovey when they are with their crushes in my fics too!
Angel Strikes Again!!!!!
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YOU'D RECKON SIR ADMIRAL MAJOR ADMIRAL VANGUARD OFFICER SECOND DEGREE PYTHAGORAS KLED HAS SEEN IT ALL.
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well yeah, aside from the fact that in the first chapter you said that she locked herself in a room with spitfire, soarin and thunderlane for four days straight. Doesnt sound like she regretted that very much.
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Funny you mention that, I was actually just thinking about how that creates a bit of an incongruity as I was writing the next chapter. It was a bit of a spur of the moment addition, and I regret it a little.
I didn't want to have Dash be a total 'blushing virgin' type either though.
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whatever floats your boat man, im just saying it did tend to stick out. Like, if this story was a train, that sentence was like a few meters of track missing, that the whole thing just sorta stumbled through.
I hope you are very detailed with the bondage scenes! <3
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Just for you, I went back and added a little more detail!
Hoping to get the new chapter up soon!
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Haha, that's awesome. I appreciate it
which I will try to get up soon (maybe today even!)
lies, beautiful lies
so far it looks not bad, but I have to read it from the beginning again, I just looke here and there, readed a big part to get a feel for the story and I like it so far. I just hope that the Anon isn't some sort of player, or the horny guy with a personality like an asshole, I want something different or a nice Anon again.
either that or they just want the one thing.
I'm just glad that they are acting more like intelligent cartoon characters then horses forced to breed here, with the moon tea and the way Dash seem not just wanting to fuck.
The thing that is going to happen next is probably because of Angle bunny and the drugs he seems to use if I got that right by the quick look I took.
I came.
Wrong color^. Sorry it just bothered me. This is really good though, great work!
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Nice catch, Thanks! Just fixed it!
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Your welcome.
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Thanks!
That's exactly it though, colors don't serve much purpose and they do bother some readers, so this fic will be their swan song!
this scene was absolutely stunning. good clop material right here. it is the perfect setup for a good sex scene... I have a feeling Applejack was really enjoying tying up Rainbow's horny butt! <3
fantastic work!
Love the story so far but a bit sad to see the colored font go away. Personally, i liked the colored font but oh well i'll live.
I know this gif is an old one, but it pretty much sums up my thoughts.
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Thanks! Glad you liked the little bit of light roleplay.
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Sorry to hear that! I know I've had a little bit of feedback that has liked the coloring, but it's about 5:1 against thus far. I may revisit in the future! I promise to always keep my character's voices as unique as possible so you'll never have any trouble distinguishing who is speaking!
Smart move, just gtfo, you saw nothing
I read this in Michel Scott's voice. I think that's enough of The Office for today.
FALCON PUUUUUUUNCH
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Hahaha, exactly!
I would be amazed if ol' Dashie will even be able to walk in ten months
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Not sure if this is a veiled reference to pregnancy... or to the railing Anon is about to give her... either way... yes.
I love it so far and can't wait to see what happens next.
And this is why you don't piss of angel bunny when he is trying to help you, and why you always read the label before you do anything. Shit is about to go down. I can't wait to see what happens next.