Rainbow Dash done something special for her friends that she never done before, will Princess Celestia accept her as an alicorn? Let's see what happens.
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Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever
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I hope you like it and please don't dislike it don't read it please if you don't like Rainbow Dash
I honestly think it is a good story, the only thing is..
It would be good to add more detail into it, because to me it was a little rushed.
I will say though, this was a funny but good story
You got the characterization down pat but the writing is a little sloppy and the pacing moves too quickly. I think that if you took your time with this and gave more detail it would've been better.
Yeah, gotta agree with Phantomlord01 on this one.
I couldn't think of anything that's why
Interesting story.. I shall give you a thumbs up, my Dashie!
I loved the idea, but it was quite rushed and it didn't have much detail.
Sorry couldn't think of much detail sorry
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Okey dokey!
Good
I think it's an amazing concept, but you could really use an editor. Keep up the good work!
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I already have 
I'm sorry, but I don't think Celestia would turn Rainbow Dash into a princess for giving gifts. If that was like that, at least Rarity would have been a princess.
I like the concept of this story, but...
1: They already said “thank you” before when they gor something.
2: Princess Celestia would never turn someone into a princess for giving gifts, like I said before: Rarity would have been one at least.
I'm sorry, but this is just my honest opinion. I'm going to read the rest now.
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If you couldn't think of anything there are multiple things you can do:
1: Take more time to think.
2: Make a blog or something asking for help
3: Ask some good writers on this site if they might have ideas/tips etc.
Well... I really like the concept of Rainbow Dash being a princess, and she's one of my two favorite ponies, but... no offense, but the quality wasn't exactly the best.
Great. Loved it. Cute.
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Thanks! :D That was very appreciated.
Rainbow Dash is the best pony... which is why she deserves proper grammar to portray them.