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Shoo Be Doo! Shoo Shoo Be Doo!

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What would you do if you had the chance to see the lost members of your family one last time? Applejack is about to find out.

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Okay, I wanted to cry my eyes out. Nice job

What a wonderful little story. Thank you for this.

I love the concept, but the fanfic had a lot of errors. Could use an editor. It's also heavy with Lavender Alicorn Syndrome.

''Did you say Adventures? Applejack would you mind tell us how you died? Ah mean if it's not too painful to talk about right now.'' Birght Macintosh asked. Buttercup glared at him but Applejack chuckled.

''It's alright but ah guess to get the full picture ah should start at the begining.'' The cowgirl cleared her throat.

''Once upon a time in the magical land of Equestria. There were two regal sisters...

You don't need to go that far back AppleJack

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