This story is a sequel to A Good Share of Lives
The third story in The Shareverse.
Fifty years ago a brave filly named Winter Song sacrifice herself to stop the insane plans of Gaia the Elder Goddess of Life. After the council and their allies stop her and the Soul Reapers the two remaining Elders step down of power.
What followed was a hard struggle to reunite the multi-verse into a less powerful but not less determined empire guide by mortals. A new era has begun and this time the mortals won't let the gods dictate their destiny.
Our story begin in the year 45 ME (Mortals Era) Harmony offer a proposition to Winter Song. He will get her, her wife and daughter out of the Elysian Fields and back in the mortal world but in exchange she will become an ambassador to unite the Kira and Gaia branches for the first time in history.
Meanwhile while The Soul Reapers have been defeated it was not as some had predicted the end of their influences on the multiverse. Editor a powerful being meant to grant any wishes was reincarnated in the body of a immature filly who see the world as her personal playground. How can Winter Song stop a villain more powerful than the Elder Goddess?
Seem Like a lot of people disliked the story can you tell me what you didn't like instead of just disliking with no explanations?
6734023 I think it's going pretty well so far.
7532772 Thanks
Just from the intro I can tell that your main issue is shoddy grammar and run on sentences, do a quick grammar check and try to make the sentences shorter, as well as fix the tenses, because sometimes that gets weird when one doesn't pay attention to it, the idea itself is pretty good, so good job on that.
But, aren't the Soul Reapers from Bleach?