Whoa Nelly buys a personal digital assistant to help her manage her hectic life. The last thing she expected was for Gizmo to become part of her life.
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Was this that idea I gave you?
Dawwwww! So cute!
That was cute. I like how you gave reasoning and purpose to Whoa's size.
I don't understand your employer's business model, Gizmo. Are you sure this isn't just a really oblique K-type pick-up artist gambit?
Nice work. I love your explanation for Nelly's most noticeable feature, and the romance really does work well. The nature of the PerDi makes a lot of sense by the end, and you drop nicely subtle hints along the way. My only complaint is that action scenes are very sparse, and you spend a lot of time explaining a simple tournament bracket. Aside from that, lovely stuff.
Thank you for this, and best of luck in the judging.
I am pleasantly surprised.
this is superbly done, and I did not see the end coming
Aw, that was sweet. The skinny nerd was a bit of a visible Chekhov's gun, but it was well executed nevertheless.