Based on the movie "The Number 23." Twilight gets a book for her birthday called "The Number 22." As she starts to read it, she finds that the main character shares many traits with her....including her past. As she continues to read, she begins seeing the number everywhere and horrifying things start happening.....including the tragic death of one of her friends. And the wierd thing is that the book predicted it all.....Can she stop the book's dreaded curse before it claims another victim? And, more importantly, can she save herself? A tale of suspense, romance, drama, horror, and mystery.
Chapters (23)
I know the story description seems a little odd, but give it a chance. I think you all will enjoy it.
>already completed the entire story
Interesting. I think I'll read when all parts have been released. :3 I loved The Number 23 so I'm hopping I'll enjoy this just as much. As I said, I'll definitely read later.
Interesting premise, I hope this works out as a story.
Ah I remember this story from fanfiction...I really need to get back to that.
way to creepy!
Spread the word to others. I want to horrify(entertain) as many members on this site as possible!
First chapter is looking pretty good! The only problems I could see were minor ones, like one or two spelling errors. The other thing I noticed was that Twilight didn't quite act as she normally would. Close, though, since I could see her saying/doing the things in this story. Overall, great job! On to the next chapter!!
This chapter was great! A bit on the short side, but great nonetheless! Seeing as you are aware of the few grammar mistakes, there's really not much else to be done here! Next chapter! LEEEEEROOYYYYYYYY mmmmJENKIINNNNNNNNS!!!!!
Couple of puntuation errors, but.... DAYUM! Shit just got real!
Great story so far, I love it! And just as an interesting side note: Pick any number below 50. You will find that most things in your life relate to that number; it isn't strange coincidence, it's simply because the sheer amount of data around you is so large, that the probability that you can link events/items/people/etc. in your life to a certain number is quite decent. The human mind is very good at picking out patterns, and fabricating patterns where it can't find one.
I know! I have a problem with 37. That number follows me everywhere! Thanks for the comments BTW.
How old are you,because you're starting to get me to freak!
You scare me.
It's a shame that I saw the movie it spoils the ending on a very well written story
hate this but i'm addicted!
I have a feeling there is going to be 22 chapters
You scare me.
YOU BASTARD! YOU KILLED RAINBOW DASH!!
After continuing a story, I kinda need a refresher, or else I'm completely lost. Do you think you could have a summarization of the last chapter? Please?
(I am going to put this reminder on the next chapter also.)
After continuing a story, I kinda need a refresher, or else I'm completely lost. Do you think you could have a summarization of the last chapter? Please?
Yay! Good chapter. Here's a Twist for you.
i think i may have said something similar to this previously but i have a feeling there are 2 more chapters (22 chapters)
The chapter felt, rushed.
i liked it an- HOLY SHIT 23 VIEWS
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Holy mother 23 chapters
*Finishes Chapter 10*
Seriously, what the bleeding fuck is Mrs. Cake's problem? Twilight was inadvertently rude to her, so now she's getting to restraining order level harassment with Twilight as some sort of wanna be Parole officer?
You broke the curse! Congrats! You spoke 24 words, not 22!
933603 lol. I'm laughing my head off. This kinda stuff triggers warnings in my brain so I start laughing and feeling elated instead of scared. My brain is weird.
Could you maybe explain how this is scaring anyone? I'm having the time of my life reading this. I've played Minecraft horror maps that actually scared me (albeit jump scares, not actually making me paranoid of something).
But don't you know? When you go comatose every night, you vividly hallucinate and forget details when you regain consciousness.
Basically, when you sleep, you dream, you wake up, you forget what it was about.
Is that a challenge? You challenge me, the guy who dreams of killing and being killed as normal dreams? They aren't nightmares, they're the dreams I enjoy. Ooohh ho ho, this is gonna be good!
Big shocker! I'm not shocked. I had my suspicions that Rainbow was the suicide blonde after she said she had visions of her jumping off a balcony and Twilight was In them. Sorry for spoiling your fun!
I'm smiling like a maniac. Want to know why? HA! Like I'd tell you! Rainbow is second best of the Mane 6 and Twilight is best but I won't say any more than that! Mwa ha ha ha ha haaaaaa!
The Everfree?
It's her mom, isn't it? Twilight Velvet. That's why she's called Twilight.
Thus is beautiful! I still don't see how anyone is scared though.
1077276 Tell me how? I need notes and I'm unable to feel "scared" of this since I'm thoroughly enjoying this.
That's not in chronological order. Twilight would've put their deaths in order subconsciously. It should be:
No TwiDash?
You're going to hate me, but most of those, I figured out on my own. Half the time, with he little information provided, came out as 23 instead of 22 while the other half was 22. I made sure I didn't add in any extra variables, like Day Light Savings, so most of that, I couldn't be correct about. I blame you. You could've hinted a little at the very beginning so most people would've thought it to be useless info but I would've cracked most of it.
A literal catch 22.