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Lise


If you happen to cry, I will be there. If you happen to smile, will you do the same for me?

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This story is a sequel to Fluttershy vs. NASCAR


During her stay on Earth, Fluttershy came across many amazing human devices. Then she saw a box.

Special thanks to FloydienSlip, MerlosTheMad, and TGM for advice and editing.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 41 )

I'll miss these. Good, light fun. All of them. Looking forward to your next project.

Poor Flutters! She just can NOT win.
So, no more of these?:fluttercry: Well, at least we have these to re-read

This was an extremely cute series, and one I'm glad to have read. Fluttershy was adorably and well written here, and I can almost imagine each of these stories being an episode or a part of an episode from the show.

D'awww, I bet that would look hilarious on the outside, 2 different pairs of back legs sticking out of a box

Oh dear. I didn't realize this was a series. I just stumbled upon the last one.

Well, the good news is that I have some cuteness to look forward to.

I totally expected the hotel manager would walk in while Fluttershy and Rainbow are still stuck inside. He would think the box is already packed, so he would tape it and send it to Equestria.
That way he would literally ship Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash!

...
Wait, they are still inside, so the above mentioned isn't impossible yet!
(Bonus-chapter!!!)

Anyway, I enjoyed your Fluttershy vs. series, including this story!
Good work!

And thus ends a cute series on par with the old Progress tales very nice.

Fluttershy vs box....
"Umm, why do I feel so strangely attracted to it?"
I always knew she liked box

A fitting end to an adorable series. I'm going to miss it, but I'm so glad you wrote it.

Dash, next time send Twilight away after she rescues you!

Anyway, cute as always. Poor Flutters... I noticed one thing, though:

“No, Rainbow, it’s alright.” Fluttershy tried to squeeze slightly to the side. “I know you have a prancing habit. We’ll just—” Rainbow’s wing smacked her in the muzzle. “Ouch!”

I think that should be 'pranking'.

Are you sure this isn't Fluttershy x Box?

Umm, why do I feel so strangely attracted to it?

8199053 :D Thanks! Happy you found them amusing :)
It's something needing finishing. :) (so now I can focus of finishing more of my unfinished stuff... *sniff*)

8199062 :) I don't know... I think she won in this one :)

8199063 Aww :) Well, maybe all of them together might make an episode. Fluttershy on Earth or something :)

8199076 :) Don't forget wings :) I now feel the urge to watch cats in boxes videos...

8199078 Yay :D Hope you enjoy :) (The original is the best, I think :))

8199092
Pfft! :) That would be silly :)
There might be a 100 word bonus chapter, by the way.mstill not sure.

8199099 Ah :) A pic of a good old fashioned Equestrian box :)))

8199111 Aww, Snow :) Thanks

8199185 All cats like box! :D

8199228 Lol, Posh :) Is this a hint you want a Solid Snake x Shy crossover? :P

8199288 Thank you :) I think the series had run its course and doing more would be forcing. Very happy you found them amusing :)

8199382 Oh no! RD's secret revealed! :P
Thankee, I'll fix that :)

8199952 Silly Bloons. No pony can have box! :P

8200510 - I totally understand that, and I honestly agree that F'shy vs. has run its course. It's the mark of a good writer that they see when they need to quit milking a concept and hang it up on a high note rather than let their series fall into mediocrity.

I know I'm running into that same thing with a lot of my work of late.

8200509 Already there, m8, but thank you kindly for the offer.:twilightsmile:

TGM

I read this before it was published, this series was cute though this one especially so.

Well done Lise, have to say my favorite one is probably the vacuum though. :p


8199063

This was an extremely cute series, and one I'm glad to have written

HiddenMaster lise alt confirmed

TGM
TGM #30 · Jun 6th, 2017 · · · Bonus ·

Author's Note:

In homage to ROBCakeran53

I only needed to read that to understand what this chapter was going to be. :rainbowlaugh:

Perfect, perfect ending. though Fluttershy might not get her Rainbow snuggles for a few more years now.

So that’s how that whole thing got started. :rainbowlaugh:

I don’t even have words for this...
Great idea!

moderately-sized box with a Rainbow Dash filly inside popped into existence

*Insta-feels at the reference*

That reference.

I'm not ready to feel this again

No... no nononono. Never again.

That...actually explains a lot
also, what game was Twilight playing?

I'm smiling already.

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