The wrath of Daybreaker

by Hyper44

Epilogue

Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there were two regal sisters who ruled together and created harmony for all the land. To do this, the eldest used her unicorn powers to raise the sun. The youngest brought out the moon to begin the night. Thus, the two sisters maintained balance for their kingdom and their subjects, all different types of ponies. As time went on, ponies began to forget the younger sister. They relished and played in the day that her elder sister brought forth but shunned and slept through her beautiful night.

One fateful night however the younger unicorn brought forth the dancing lights and lit up the sky with beauty. Ponies of every kind were awoken and realized their mistake. The night was not real darkness, it was a time of rest and peace, a time when one could see lights that they never would be able to in the day. Their newfound appreciation for the night caused the elder sister to become jealous and resentful.

One fateful day the elder sister refused to lower the sun to make way for nightfall. The younger sister tried to reason with her but the bitterness in the older mare’s heart had transformed her into a wicked mare of evil, Daybreaker! She vowed that she would shrowed the land in eternal day. Reluctantly, the younger harnessed the most powerful magic know to ponies, the Elements of Harmony.

Using the magic of the Elements of Harmony she defeated her elder sister and banished her permanently in the sun. The younger sister took on responsibility for both sun and moon and harmony has been maintained in Equestria for generations since.

Comments

[PlieRow666]

Is that is it?

[PixelMoon]

Aw, it's over....

[TaleWeaver]

It needs to keep going

[Foxhelm]

I wonder how Luna will interact with, I assume, Twilight when Twilight reads this on the eve of Daybreaker's release.

[Shadow-Aura]

Sequel I demand a sequel to this epic story

[Hyper44]

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Well everyone, I did think of making a sequel but I can't write it now and I was unsure how to proceed with the plot. I wanted to follow the same basic plot as the pilot episode but realistically the change to the past would drastically change the future. Just think of the Cutie remark. I even considered a different set of six ponies since it was possible that the mane six would never have been born. Either that or the having the plot play out differently. What do you think?

[PixelMoon]

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[PlieRow666]

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Having the plot play out differently.

[TaleWeaver]

If you make a sequel keep the main six, or put sunset or starlight in it. I find that putting oc's and c list chareters lessens the story. But that's just me

[Shadow-Aura]

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Change the cast to maybe your fans charecters or something unless you want to use canon charecters but it think the best plot follows the plot just luna and celestia switch and all the summer sun celebration could be the winter moon festival

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Ok. I'll probably use the mane six but alter the plot like I did in the first story. Basically keep the basic plot points that made the original story what it was but still create something new. I really like the Winter Moon Festival but it's probably better the Summer Moon Festival to keep it in the same season and exact time frame. It would be interesting to imagine the mane six challenging Daybreaker and Twilight being Luna's student. As well as to recreate Equestria developed under her rule.

[PlieRow666]

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How will Equestria change on luna rules? And also how come this story is incomplete when the story is over?

[Shadow-Aura]

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I am glad you liked the winter moon festival idea but yeah you made sense I thought winter was good as the moon stays out longer as summer sun longest day of year and winter moon longest night

[PixelMoon]

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Yas!!!!

[Hyper44]

8353834 Oops! I forgot to switch to complete. Thank you, it's switched.

[Hyper44]

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That's true, i didn't think of that. It does sound like a better idea now. The Everfree would be interesting in winter.

[Hyper44]

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I planned to only have one story and leave the rest up to each readers imagination but now I want to play it out in my own imagination I'll let you know when I can start.

[Shadow-Aura]

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I am glad you agree but it's always up to you

[PixelMoon]

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Okie dokie lokie!

[Hyper44]

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Hopefully I'll have the time soon. Thank you.

[PixelMoon]

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I hope so.

[Shadow-Aura]

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I'm looking forward to it

[Kitsune716]

Im honestly so sad this was abandoned

[PixelatedPerson]

Please please please make more of this. I need it so damn bad.