A short story with a lesson over what has become one of my pet peeves. Rainbow Dash becomes disturbed over new historical fiction written about King Sombra and needs a little advice from Twilight.
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6056525 Yeah, sorry. It was a quickie. I literally wrote it in an afternoon. I got a little irritated over people who read things like historical fiction and believe that what that that is the way it is so I guess I kind of wrote in in protest.
Good story with a good point and Princess Celestia: Vampire Hunter was a nice touch.
6089214 Thank you.
This is a pony version of Abe Lincoln: Vampire Hunter, isn't it. Never read it, actually.
6340405 Me neither but I thought it would be a good joke to put in the story.
A little too tell-y, not enough showing, i think.
6406851 It was a quickie. I did plan on writing a full length novel with a pony using such stories to gain a foothold and destroy the image of the mine six but I had my main project, Identity to work on. It's one where I tried to make it so that different critical moments turned out to be exactly what you didn't expect. I'm almost finished so I just may have time to do that.
Anyway, thank you for your feedback.
This was an interesting little story.
Ever consider doing a sequel about the others discovering Rainbow's little secret?
6429034 Thank you and thanks for the favorites. I do plan to write a longer story with this, I've just been busy with my main story, Identity for a while. It's taken up most of my writing time but I'm almost done so I'll be able to focus on this one. I didn't think about it but I certainly can have them discover Rainbow's little secret.
6431054 You're welcome.
And all right then. Can't wait to read it if/when it gets done.
6431066 Thank you. Please give me feedback whenever you feel like it. I'm trying to improve my writing enough to publish books and need constructive criticism.
6431155 all right