A filly is picked on due to her heritage but finds counsel in one of her classmates.
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Krass McWriter
And thou camith down Krass who holdth the commandments, he pointed out thou sinners who had broketh thy rule and he broughth down his ban hammer to bare. and all was good. -ArchangelDoom
Krass McWriter
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A very touching little tale Krass, I enjoyed it a lot.
nice story :)
Glad to see you're not leaving
Daaawwwwww!
human's should be humans there, bud.
Eh the bottom note
. Needed more to write... Shipping!
I think the notification system has some kind of bug, because I just got a second notification about this story being uploaded.
still, nice story.
Pretty good beginning.
*checks story frontpage*
Complete?
But I want more!
I liked the author's note more than I probably should have.
"Damn, story's too short. ...well, the hell with it. Shipping! Woo!"
That was fantastic!
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I WROTE IT FROM MY PHOOOOOOONE
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(But then again, I write EVERYTHING from my phone
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Preeetty much
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Because I dont have enough on plate already...
nice
I enjoyed this, and shipping is good. Nothing wrong with shipping - the writer of 'Hearts and Hooves Day' be damned.
Why aren’t the Ponies perfect begins of love and compassion? Where are the not-so-subtle messages telling the reader that he should feel bad for being a human instead of a colorful pony? Is this really a Conversion Bureau story? I’m confused.
The interesting thing about this story is, that it could easily take place outside the Conversion Bureau universe. All someone has to do is making the other kids bullying Willow for begin a blank flank and no-one could tell that it’s a TCB tale. For some people this may be actually a good thing.
This story also contains what is probably the funnies explanation for a ship. The little romance between Willow and Golden Sand is still cute even if it’s just there to reach the 1.000 words limit.
All in all this was nice little story with a lack of preachiness that ruins some other TCB stories for me. In my own opinion Ponies are far from begin perfect. They can be as mean as your average human, especially fillies.
When in doubt, ship everything.
Huh, thanks for making short I needed to go and do my job!
Nice story, though I am now curious as to wether a "sequel" is going to eventually occur showing Willow further down the road of life,
But regardless, off to my job! ...That sounds weird to me
Wild TCB appears!
KRASS uses SHIPPING!
READER is paralyzed!
I liked this. My only complaint is it's too short. :P
Short and Sweet... little emphasis on short, but there isn't much you can do to expand the length... not without taking the effectiveness out of the story.
Nice job!
Nice to read a conversion verse story that isn't humanity against the alien invaders. Everyone is so wrapped up in the 'beat up ponies who think they're better than us' that they never bother to think about the OTHER things this kind of setting could have INSTEAD. A foal who has to deal with the fact her parents weren't always ponies, and DOESN'T feel like she's a human trapped in a pony's body (so what would she be if only one of her parents was a former human? A centaur?).
Seriously, so many stories are about DESTROY THE INVADERS! that no one CARES about a scenario where humans becoming ponies was a meant to SAVE their lives (and ponies don't treat it as becoming a master race). And this story is what the conversion verse SHOULD BE.
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Ahhh, you poor poor soul. You had the misfortune of coming in after the golden age of TCB. If you want TCB sans the hate, I'd reccomend the following fics/authors:
All my TCB works of course. Most notably The Wack Wonderful Revolving door and An Azure future
Windchaser's works Most notably Last Man standing and ten days
Anonsi's works Most notably yellowstone
There's more, I also hear BlueDWarrior is excellent.