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doomie-22
Just a guy who likes writing and reading some pony fanfiction.
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A reasonable start, although mildly disappointing that it hasn't reached the clop yet (but with only one chapter so far it isn't a problem by any means).
I'll keep an eye on this one.
Needs more boning! Get to the boning!
So Sweetie Belle has a crush on Spike? Verdict for this, happening or not?
Ohhhhh! It's staaaaaaarting!
No idea why you decided to add some Rumbaloo and SweetieSpike hinting in this story though. It was just random.
8183860 Because they make adorable couples!
8183798 Don't know yet. That depends on MrBroniac.
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Nah. Rumble gets all the hot fillies for himself.
Can i get the derpibooru ID for the cover art? If it is derpi?
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8184121 I tried to find it, but couldn't. It must have been taken down, for whatever reason. I'm sorry.
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Sad face.
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I found it. ID 739269
8184279 Yep! That's the one!
Wow. So that's how Sugar Cube Corner serves their milkshakes now, huh?
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I didn't notice that before. Fixed.
8184602 Awwwwwwwww... the original was better...
8184795 So was the weight gain discussion, but I took it out.
8196149 I don't know.
Rumble you stupid idiot didn't you pay attention in class?!?! And Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom fore shame fore shame.
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What?
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Rumble should have been paying attention in class, and SB and AB should know that if your friend has a crush on someone then they’re off the table so to speak. It’s a rule of honor.
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What implies that he wasn't paying attention in class? And remember that nothing official has been made between Rumble and Scootaloo. And blame MrBroniac for this 'cause he requested I write this. If it were up to me, I would have replaced Rumble with Spike or some other colt.
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I’m not blaming anyone I’m just getting into the story while it’s still Teen and having some fun. By the time it hits M hopefully I’ll be done.
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So you'll stop reading the story as soon as we get to the sexy bits?
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You say it like it's strange.
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Nah, it's not strange.
Woah, so there still gonna be the next chapter.
At first, I thought you will handle everything in just two chapters. xD
I don't mind though. ;P At least there was some oral sex in this chapter. I really enjoyed it.
8287280 Glad to hear it.
When the next chapter coming in?
8651446 When I write it.
As much as I want to follow this fic, the fact that it's just going to be Sweetie and Apple Bloom just doesn't sit right with me.
Maybe it's because I ship Rumbleloo THAT hard, I don't know.
9116539 Blame the guy who requested it. If it were up to me, I would gladly included all three Crusaders. I understand your reasoning for not liking this story, but I am glad that you took the time to read it and comment on it.
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No problem.
The story is nice but I dont like the shipping I mean sweetie bell is button mash GF and tender taps is apple blooms BF and scoots lo supposed to be rumbles GF . So story is ok but I feel the ships are bad but still it's nice even though I hate rumble being with sweetie bell or apple bloom instead of scoot along its pretty nice
#sweetie mash
#tender bloom
#rumbeloo
9450792 Blame this guy. Personally, I ship Sweetie with Spike and I ship Button with Rumble. But I don't mind Apple Bloom being shipped with Tender Taps or Scootaloo being shipped with Rumble or Sweetie being shipped with Button. It's just my personal preference.
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Thanks you don't know this but this comment actually really helped me feel better anyway I'm going to write a rumble mash fiction soon let's hope that goes well kk bye and thank you
9451440 You're welcome.
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You're an ass and should learn respect. This was MY choice, NOT yours. If you want a fic with your ships then request it yourself instead of coming here and spreading your butthurt.
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Hey listen hear I don't intend on starting a fight here all I'm doing is expressing my views and opinions which we have the right to . I'm not starting a fight with you okay and if you will reply in a insulting or hurtful manner then I will not respond or reply . Thank you
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FimFiction is full of the clops with your ships in it, so why are you coming here and complain? You should be happy instead. I'm surprised you at least gave it a try and read it.
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Ok I do apologise I was not aware they my ship has aquire a vast amount of fics . Have a good day
What a sweet ending
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The dislikes are from Button Mash
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Finally! The conclusion!
Gotta say, you did a great job with combining oral and fucking at the same time, even though it seemed a lil' repetitive and some of the positions (for example, Bloom rimming Sweets with Rumble screwing her from behind at the same time or Sweets rimming Bloom while riding Rumble) made it difficult to imagine.
Everything was very lewd, sloppy, dirty, hot and wet. This whole Clubhouse must be now filled with cum, jizz and saliva all over the place! 
The incest jokes were fun! 
Surprised Scoots didn't catch or join them at the end. 
3 years... dang.
But we made it! Never lost even a piece of hope for this story after such long time. Thank you so much for writing this, doomie-22! You're the best! 
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Yeah, I got that feeling too as I was writing this. Again, this hadn't been edited by the time I published it.
Don't really see how that's hard to imagine, but okay.
Let's hope they spray the clubhouse down with LOTS of air freshener.
Glad you thought so!
This may or may not be incorporated if I decide to write a sequel.
I remember you specifying that you didn't want Scootaloo finding out about this or joining in at all. But if you really want that, maybe there could be a sequel?
Again, I apologize for how long this took. Circumstances were simply put of my control. And I know how that feels. It's not a good feeling. I've been eagerly anticipating the fifth chapter of this story for almost three years now. (Seriously, it's a great read! Go read it!
)
No problem. This was a lot of fun to write.
Again, thanks for the kind words.
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I mean, if Sweetie was eating Bloom out while the latter was bouncing at the top of Rumble, she'd have to bounce along with them. Then again, it may be possible.
This part really confused me. So, Apple Bloom was eating Sweets out while lying on her back on the top of Sweetie's back, not to mention she somehow managed to reach her asshole when her behind was occupied by Rumble at the same time? I mean, if the ponut is really located right under its tail it could make sense. I might be just dumb.
Horse anatomy is confusing.
That's true. I only wanted a threesome. But I can't remember I requested Scootaloo not finding out.
I thought you may surprise us and add her at the very end with a wtf moment. 
Nah, I'm good. You don't need to write a sequel, unless if you want to write some Rumbaloo.
I'll take a lookie.
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Ah, I see what you mean now.
I meant to say that Apple Bloom was lying on her stomach on top of Sweetie's back eating out her butt while Rumble pounded her pussy. This probably more my fault on my end than yours.
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I see.
And what I said back then too. It was long time ago, after all.
Think you could do another upcoming couple?
10082181 Certainly! If you would like your own, please consider becoming a Patron.