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Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle want to help Scootaloo with her crush on Rumble, seeing that she's too stubborn to admit her feelings, also getting assistance from the dancing pony Tender Taps. Dinky wants to help Rumble with his crush, but unfortunately for the Crusaders, Rumble's affection seemed to be focused on a sweet little Unicorn Filly. Apple Bloom hopes to get Scootaloo her colt, unless Sweetie Belle herself starts to return Rumble's feelings.
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Somebody better bring in Jerry Sprinter for these foals.
Just because Sweetie's sister reads romance novels doesn't make her an expert.
Time for an intervention.
Either way of the situation, someone's going to be heartbroken.
Regardless of the situation, Scootaloo's going to be heartbroken unless Sweetie Belle makes things right.
An epiphany! If Thunderlane and Rarity do get married, then Sweetie Belle and Rumble will become stepsiblings!!!
Is AppleJack, Rainbow Dash, Flitter and Cloudchaser going to make an appearance?
This could've all been avoided if Scootaloo would've mare up and ask him out now their friendship is going to be torn apart.
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Flitter and Cloudchaser have their appearances already. Applejack and Rainbow Dash will appear soon.
I sense broken friendship.
7770022 I agree
By the looks of things getting back together won't solve the real reasons.
Looks like Apple Bloom's got some explaining to do. Idea for a chapter if Rumble and Sweetie Belle get back together: I thought of Rumble getting the feather flu and Sweetie Belle and Rarity offer to take care of him at the Bowtique. Rarity because she likes him being with her sister, and Sweetie Belle because she loves him.
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Story's almost over, though if I do more with this then that could be a possibility.
Drama Bomb.
Rumor has it Spike is seeing a certain dragoness in secret.
I made an account just to like this story
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Much appreciated
Yep, nothing is definitely turning into something between Rumble and Sweetiebelle.
7754031 No, actually Sweetiebelle and Rumble will be brother and sister in laws.
Once again, love Dinky's devotion for keeping her best friend's heart from being treated like dirt by Applebloom's little get Rumble with Scootaloo scheme.
Well, it was bound to go out of control sooner or later.
Oh yeah. That was so satisfying seeing Sweetiebelle stand up to Applebloom and tell her like it is. That she's developed real feelings for Rumble and that she won't let herself be used this way or let Rumble be treated like some toy to be tossed around.
At this point I wouldn't mind if Sweetiebelle ended her friendship with Applebloom. She's a horrible friend.
There's a typo in this line:
"Saying that Rumble and Sweetie Belle look great together, telling Scootaloo she cna find any other pony, you've even started doing stuff together with her, you planned all this out just so that you can have Scootaloo to yerself!" Apple Bloom said.
I'm fairly certain yerself is supposed to represent an accent, but you definitely mispelled can as cna.
Bravo!!! Bravo!!! One of the best fanfics i every read! You are awesome!
I am enjoying this story so far-
And that - ^^^ - is precisely what would happen in the show if Sweetie Belle tried something like this.
Very nice story. I really liked it.
OH an YAY FOR DIAMONDMASH!!!!
A very great underrated fic, though it did repeat itself a couple of times you did an amazing job of giving them character and showing who they could be. I want to see more of this, it's not often that people write for the fillies and colts of Ponyville, I love having them be Spike's friends in my stories, never understood why people do OC's when there are already so many created for them. Now I want to read more of Rarity and Thunderlane's relationship, maybe a bit more mature if you like the idea. I don't know, but I'll be keeping an eye on you.
*When Scootaloo finds out-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F07HbfgzpG8
Am I the only one who thinks that Rainbow Dash is going to start 💩? She’ll think that Scootaloo’s friend has back stabbed her, and when she finds out that her friends are in on it.
I think I have a general idea of how this situation will turn out.
https://media.giphy.com/media/13fOmrLMOA2TzW/giphy.gif
Everything fell apart because Dinky thought that thought. Also, you forgot the "n't" in shouldn't.
Dude, I've been reading your Rumble stories non-stop. Especially with this weekend's upcoming episode!
I've been following your works since you first started the friendships flight series and your writing has evolved drastically. Keep up the good work and this story so quite underrated
Hmm, I smell... *Hair blows in the wind* Emotional Issues....
Just me? Okay I'll leave.
That's oddly specific Apple Bloom.
That doesn't sound like Rarity would ever use those kind of speech patterns. "Wanna" and "Gonna" don't sound like something she'll say.
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Rainbow Dash and Applejack are bad influences.
I would ask where Pinkie Pie came from, but that would be questioning her. And that is not something we do.
The Love Triangle dilema.
Ah, so this is what it looks like when plane crashes into a train.
Poor Tender Taps, always getting caught up in everybody's schemes.
The anticipation is killing me, the lovelies have gone on for long enough, when's the turning point?
Finally!
Woah, this just got meta all of a sudden. This filly is speaking on behalf of all shippers.
Is this a reference to Galaga, or is it a different space alien fighting game?
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I imagined it as a Street Fighter version of Halo, not based on anything in particular, just a bit of wild imagination.
But... What of Button mash?
Great fic. Good job.
Awesome story though dang - that subverted my expectations from Rumbaloo, Appletaps and Sweetiemash, and I think Dinky would like Pipsqueak or someone cute and sweet like that. :)