Celestia was sitting on her throne in her Castle, when she got a letter about Spike. She goes to Ponyville to find out what happened and discoveres a tragic sight that will break her heart.
Also this will take place before season 3
I do not own my little pony
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The feels in this story. It was a good story, but why did you have to write something like this.
The grammer and paragraph spacing is off by a lot. There are even a few spelling errors. Also, in a past tense 3rd person story, don't write "all you can hear" also, don't add any music listings, as it distracts from the story. Make sure you type out numbers as well. Other than that it's a good start
stable for a first time
Thnx guy's im new to this
There will be a new story guy's that im working on, a Spike x Applebloom story
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Just imagine how if will be if obabscribbler did a dramatic reading of it
Gee, thanks Greg. I really appreciate the fact that you made me cry for ten minutes.
I assume this is an Alternate Universe that a Spike is dead? It's sad either way. I know in my stories when I try to kill off a character, it gets too tragic and I wind up sparing the character's life. But death scenes usually involve criminals, i have no troubles with those.
Really seemed like a misplaced chapter from a larger story than a short stand alone story. Neutral vote from me.