Shining Armor is afraid Cadence might be upset that he unknowingly had sex with Chrysalis for several weeks. Instead, she wants to hear all about it. She even has a few other ideas, or mares, she'd like to see him pursue. A lot of impregnation ensues
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thought?
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Funny enough, I caught that on GDrive as well. s'weird yo.
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Alicornication
sibling?
8506274
Nibbling means 'niece or nephew'.
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I had to stop reading about halfway through 6.3, at which point Twilight was upset and powerless, everybody else was getting ready to play some stupid sex game, and nobody, especially her parents, gave a flying fuck about Twilight's feelings, and everybody expected that somehow she would just get over it somehow. That's far more hurtful than any of the rapey shit Chrysalis is pulling, cause I mean yeah I get it she's evil, gonna be a cuntface. So far the most any of her loved ones has even acknowledged her feelings has been to call her racist. Not cool.
8506268
That's glorious.
8506286
Nibling, actually. One B.
Apparently I'm never too butthurt to nitpick.
You lied to me, when I search for: polyarmory (fanfic)
or when I search: "polyarmory (fanfic)"
Nothing appears on derpi D:
Why have you forsaken me like this!?
P.S. Love the story thou.
8506323
Only one R in polyamory.
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I'm so ashamed! But thanks, I fixed it.
8506296
Huh. That's really far removed from what I was going for or how I imagined everyone feeling as I wrote. I'm going to give this chapter a run-through with that in mind to check how I worded everything.
8506328
I copy pasted from the front page :S
8506451
I don't know what misspelling my own fanfic title says about me
It's fixed now though
8506698
theres a few spelling errors near the end of the story. also I was hoping you would put twilight and shining first since they both so clearly wanted it. oh well. I guess I shall just have to wait for the wedding night....hehehe
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I felt like twilight would suddenly realize her mistake and curl up in a ball and cry or somthing. it just seemed sad to me that she couldn't look past her racism to see them trying to have fun and her ruining it.
And now we know.
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Yeah not really what I was going for. I think I slipped a bit toward my other writing persona, so I made a few changes. Nothing that changes what happened, it just makes clear that Twilight's family and friends are on her side and that she begrudgingly enjoys herself. I think it sticks closer to the mood of the previous chapters.
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Well, it's considerably better than it was. I really appreciate your taking feedback so well.
Moar!!!! I need Moar please, if that's okay with you that is...
meh...I was enjoying this up till now but the whole twilight family incest bit kinda ruined it for me. just not my thing :/
otherwise it's still pretty good
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The parents were there just for the one chapter.
Kinky. Me likes. Nice to see Twilight finally replacing that stick up her ass with something more enjoyable.
That did seem a little impulsive for Twilight.
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Maybe. My reasoning is that she spent the whole last chapter getting pent up and not acting upon it and now she's reached critical.
Also it is a well known scientific fact that geeky girls are a beast in the sack Okay maybe not, but I like the idea of it since intelligence is hot to me.
♫I gave you my heart and then you turned around♫
I heard this in singsong. Dang it, Friendship is Witchcraft!