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Background scenes from the EG special, "Dance Magic" featuring my OC, Second Person as Sour Sweet's moralistic boyfriend. Contains spoilers, obviously.

(Sex tag for suggestive humor only)

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I'm waiting for the English release of Dance Magic so Ill have to wait a bit before I can read this. Will add it to my read later list for August.

I really like this story

This basically all comes from what Sour Sweet says in the pre-song scene, isn't it? "Stealing isn't who we want to be."

There are few things more terrifying or dangerous than a thinking Lemon Zest. One of them is a Lemon Zest who actually has an idea.

And it's always good to see Second step up and take a stand, even if it's noncanon.

Aww that was sweet.

Supposedly Indigo was on vacation at the time.

8173862 Yeah, I saw a screenshot of that explanation. On a DHX staff member's twitter, right? All I have to say to them is, pics or it didn't happen. And by pics, I mean please show Indigo lounging on a beach :rainbowwild:

This could've been where she was actually better maybe sometime before 'Bitter Pill to Swallow''.

8176666 In my main series, Sour didn't achieve remission until well after graduating from CPA. Also, Cinch was still principal.

Of course, the couple's intimate moment just had to be intruded upon. Bailey jumped up and licked right on their lip-lock.

"Bailey!" Sour laughed as she wiped off her lips. "This isn't a threesome, boy!"

:rainbowlaugh:that's just great:rainbowlaugh:

Honestly, I liked this, I like this a lot, but I think it could be even better if you adapted the special into your universe, instead of trying to write around the special, let us truly see your take on Dance Magic.

I liked seeing more of the Shadowbolts perspective on this. Also, Lemon trying to think was adorable.

"Stealing someone's ideas is what the old Crystal Prep would do! Setting someone up for failure is what the old Crystal Prep would do! Do you guys remember what the old Crystal Prep did to Twilight? Do you remember how we pushed her into becoming a raging she-demon? Her cry for help as she was swallowed up by that ball of magic? Is that what we want to continue to be?"

Not to necropost on a six year old fic, but the use of 'we' here is fascinating from a character angle; it implies that Second at least partly blames himself for Midnight Sparkle, not in a 'I didn't do enough to stop it' way, which is also something he would do, but he genuinely believes he helped pressure Scitwi into nearly destroying the universe.
I love the concept that he was part of the crowd singing Unleash The Magic and he was like two inches to the left of the shot, Wallflower Blush style. Like yeah he probably just didn't have the confidence to say this was a bad idea in front of everybody but the image of ya boy watching two of his classmates nearly get vored and deciding "yes, this incomprehensible force is necessary to win these games we've always won without it and is also totally safe c:" is both lighting up my neurons like a Christmas tree and sending my sides into low earth orbit.
Of course, now I'm thinking about what would have happened if Second ended up opening the magic collecter instead...

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