Moving to Manehattan to join the MPD forensic team, Lightspeed encounters a lonely all-nighter in the police forensics lab. After lightning and fate struck, she becomes a speedster, able to run faster than even the fastest athlete! In order to combat Queen Chrysalis' conspiracy to take over Manehattan, Lightspeed dons the red suit to protect her home from this chitin clad criminal. She must become this city's symbol of hope and justice. She is, THE FLASH!
Hey! The72ndHunter here (the author). So this is my first story! Yaaay! Criticism and whatnot is appreciated, and I hope you enjoy this total ripoff story!
P.S. Do you like the 'chitin clad criminal' bit? I'm a little proud of it myself. 
(P.P.S. I don't own DC comics, the Flash, MLP, or any of that shiz.)
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Edit: I've sort of quit this story. I want to come back to it, but in the interest of honesty, I have absolutely no idea what I'm doing, or how I'm going to write this. I've also got another story in the works, but I still want this to go places. Regardless, this is now officially on hiatus.
Okay decent concept, very much appreciate the way you strike out on your own instead of gluing yourself to what's popular, eagerly awaiting more.
I'm not sure if I like how you cut to other things in 3rd person, and then write most of the story in 1rst person. Lightspeed also seems a little generic. But still, off to a solid start.
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Thanks! Good criticism.
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This isn't him, but isn't that Barry overall in the comics? All I've read of Barry is from Rebirth as I'm more of a Wally West type of person. But Barry's always seemed a bit generic.
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Barry's a pretty generic "nice guy" and I really enjoy Wally a lot more, but I meant that Lightspeed feels even more generic than him. The only personality traits I can see are "nice" and "late."