Darkness not really upon us.

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Twilight_the_spy

Twilight_the_spy #1 · May 1st, 2017 · · · Go to con a human, end up a pony. ·

Ooh, another one of these stories :D
I believe I also read this story (sadly forgotten) that you were referring to in the a/n?

Flyingninjafish

Flyingninjafish #2 · May 1st, 2017 · · · Go to con a human, end up a pony. ·

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Yeah, that's the one. Loved the original, but I kinda wanted one with some more 'adult content', so I eventually came up with this. Though I expect the sexy stuff to come later.
Any idea on a better name though? Cause I could not come up with anything better than the place holder I've got now.

Twilight_the_spy

Twilight_the_spy #3 · May 1st, 2017 · · · Go to con a human, end up a pony. ·

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I was thinking something like
Fallen Knight Rising
Darkness Not Really Upon Us (Unless the character is actually going to try to be a villain)
Receding Darkness (Again, unless the character wants to be a villain)

Flyingninjafish

Flyingninjafish #4 · May 1st, 2017 · · · Go to con a human, end up a pony. ·

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Most of those sound more like epic story titles, not what I'm looking for.
I wasn't really planning for the story to be some epic action story. Sure there's gonna be a few action scenes where appropriate, but it's more gonna be about Will/Sombra fitting into Ponyville while everyone searches everywhere, except there to find him. You can propbably figure out everyone's reactions to the news that he's under their noses the entire time.
The 2nd one's probably the best as it's not very serious, and shows he's not a villain.

Twilight_the_spy

Twilight_the_spy #5 · May 1st, 2017 · · · Go to con a human, end up a pony. ·

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Oh so it's going more down the path of comedy then.
You could go with 'Right Under Their Nose,' or 'Looking in the Wrong Empire.'

Or maybe 'Sombra, King of Friendship.'

Another could be 'Standing Out, but Fitting In' (to go with the idea of fitting into Ponyville even though he is supposedly a villain).

Also, you may want to put a spoiler tag on the tagged post.

Flyingninjafish

Flyingninjafish #6 · May 1st, 2017 · · · Go to con a human, end up a pony. ·

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4th one sounds good, also I put in the spoiler tag things you suggested.

I have since renamed this story after your 2nd suggestion, thank you for it.

Twilight_the_spy

Twilight_the_spy #7 · May 3rd, 2017 · · · A 'warm' welcome ·

Quality improved.
Writer upgrade achieved: You are now a writer level 4.
Continue upgrading (and writing, of course).
I like this story. Also, notice you got the name changed :P

Flyingninjafish